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Guest90206 wrote:I was going to try and find something... but... yeah, that about sums it up.

I appreciate the kind words, I really do.

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Doomish returns!

He never went anywhere, he's just been writing for another VN and the like.

I already told you this was great as you wrote it to a live audience in crispy, but I'll go ahead and reiterate that.

All's fair in love and war. Brothers in Arms This can't be good for my heart at all. I crouch and tip toe behind cover through a deserted, war-ravaged town with my M16 in hand, watching the back as Kenji and I move forward. We've been silent for nearly three minutes now, both of us too paranoid to ...

I'm actually enjoying this one. A bit strange in terms of flow while reading on occasion, but that's really my only complaint so far.

Banda wrote:Pregnant Hanako...

Why does this make me "d'aww" so hard!!!

My self image of her with a baby bump makes me want to have a pregnant wife.

I wanted to write cutesy Hanako. Therefore, I did. I'd Rather Have You "H-Hisao?" A cute stutter brings me out of my light nap, my eyes slowly peeling open. Dim light streaks in through our open blinds, a new set that we picked out the other week at the local department store. I notice fl...

Actually I think this stands pretty well on its own. I'm not sure what a sequel could add. I whole heartedly agree, people that want more just want smut Actually, people asking for more seem to be more interested in the Aki-Hisao dynamic. Being shoved into fatherhood, learning to love a child who i...

Tormound wrote:

YourFavAnon wrote:I already told you in crispy, but this was fantastic. If you don't write another part to this, I will.

Seriously.

Very nice story, really great.
Also FavAnon if you do write an another part to this can you post a link here?

If he doesn't, I surely will.

I already told you in crispy, but this was fantastic. If you don't write another part to this, I will.

Seriously.

Quite an enjoyable chapter. Felt a bit like a filler, but it also tied up some loose ends and established the party for the trip. Definitely ready for the next chapter.

Helbereth wrote:Well, I'm thoroughly depressed...

If something like this happens in your story, I will be absolutely perma-depressed.

I think I'll file this one under a "Neutral" end a "Bad" end is where Hisao and Suzu break up and/or hate each other I'm sorry, but that makes absolutely no sense. Hisao nearly died of a fucking heart attack, and Suzu just killed herself. Not to mention, she literally said herse...

Doing a pretty solid job of kind of playing off whether this is headed for the bad ending or the good ending. Overall solid chapter, very interesting turn of events.. That was the bad ending. I just didn't want people to know that going in. I'll change that later, once we start on the other branch....

nevermind