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Certainly an interesting chapter, to say the least.

N-not like I'd ever do something like that or anything...

I do enjoy all these little stories and how they fill in a whole post VN Hanako route world. I wrote this story in about an hour and a half last night, so I'm pretty proud of the outcome. I have my whole world kind of set on a timeline in my head, as relationships like Shizune-Misha, Hisao-Hanako, ...

Clairvoyance My face scrapes against the ground as I practically slide across the sidewalk, gritting my teeth in an stupid attempt to null the pain. "Oh yeah? Well you fuckers can go eat a dick! I'll find somewhere else to drink!" The guard waves his hand as the other laughs at me. I shoo...

http://pastebin.com/LHMc4v8u Bam. The addition of Shizune and Misha isn't making the story as kickass as I would hope for, since I really like their characters. Hoping it picks up soon, since it certainly has the potential. Now I'll explain a couple of things here. In response to the first bit here...

I believe an "awww" is appropriate here. I must now go kill a grizzly bear bare-handed to regain my manhood, excuse me. So, did Lilly go to Scotland? Or did she and Hanako have a falling out? Or is she just not relevant to the story? If you read my other series that I just finished up, Ha...

Cute children, Hanako being Hanako, and Slice of Life feels. You know my weaknesses. Slice of life type stuff is what I like to write. Glad you enjoyed I like this a lot, I think the relationships between all of the characters are well written. I'm looking forward to see where this goes. The only r...

So, I thought about just writing a long piece that was going to run between 5-10k words with this same exact scenario, then I realized that the first three scenes alone equated to about 6k words. So, with that, I'll be starting a new series entitled 'Our Little Getaway', another short (but kind of l...

While I'll agree it's lost some momentum, isn't that kind of expected. Christ, the dude is writing an entire pseudo-route and actually trying to complete it, should be expected to have a few chapters that may seem slower or less important than others. I actually enjoyed the last chapter. Was refresh...

Bi-Polar Hernandez wrote:>trying to use a picture directly from 4chan

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And you're attempting to greentext outside of 4chan.

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CaptainFalcon wrote:I absolutely enjoyed this, I look forward to reading anything you write in the future!

Glad you enjoyed. Lots of ideas have sprouted from this series, actually.

Such as the one I plan to start on tomorrow. May be a bit into next week before I post another piece.

-snip- It wasn't really the whole fact of not liking writing Rin or Lilly here, it was actually thinking about how to write them without being redundant and overly linear in the story. The idea that he bounces around from talking to one girl, to the next, to the next, to the next was actually the o...

Endings and Beginnings The night has continued to fly forward. There's been a lot of catching up, billiard games, hugs and laughs... Oh, and drinks. Lots and lots of drinks. That being said, I haven't drank too much. Enough to get a buzz, but not enough to get drunk like the others: Misha, Hanako a...

This seems suffice.

Pardon the delay on part four, I plan on writing it up tomorrow.

I like this. Good to see the beginning of their relationship, even if it starts after graduation in the Hanako path. University can be a little bit of a discovery period with some people, so that's how I'm taking it with Shizune. Keeping that competitive edge, but finally ceding victory to her gut ...