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Mirage_GSM wrote:

Feurox wrote:RIP in peace.

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You do know what RIP stands for, don't you?

That's the joke

Glad to see a new update, amazing there are stories here that have been going more than a year and are still being updated

Maybe Miki POV will break the curse

I disagree. Just read through it and it felt like what happened the end was coming a few chapters before. I would have liked more context and fewer time skips but what happened fits the characters. Flighty rich girl obsessed with new experiences and competition is not going to be content with a ...

Good so far

Just saw this, dialogue is quite good. I especially like it because, even though I like KS, I don't particularly like Hisao as a character. Maybe my personality is weird but this guy is more likable to me.

Great update

I can't wait to see how you handle Hisao's parents

Liking it so far

Just caught up myself, I'm liking it

The amount of money is nitpicking. Months in the hospital/multiple surgeries in the US can be super expensive. If you want to justify it, just add in money for experimental medication + tuition at Yamaku. The only thing important plot wise is Hisao needs lots of money. A KS/Breaking Bad story doesn ...

Please don't be discouraged by any nitpicking. The nitpicking will make you a better writer and will make the story better for everyone who comes to read this in the coming months (or years, some stuff here goes on for over a year). This is a fabulous premise. With a little suspension of disbelief I ...

I have no idea how this is gonna play out but I'm definitely enjoying it.

The quality seems to go up with every entry. Very good dialogue.

So far pretty good, interested to see where this goes