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by Machoman
Tue Jun 11, 2013 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 28317

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]

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by Machoman
Sun Nov 18, 2012 7:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 728751

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/14]

Really like where this is going
by Machoman
Tue Nov 13, 2012 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
Replies: 55
Views: 30891

Re: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]

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by Machoman
Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 368440

Re: Rika Story

We appreciate you finishing it up, thanks.
by Machoman
Wed Aug 15, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: I wish Misha had her own route *spoilers for Shizune's route
Replies: 65
Views: 33155

Re: I wish Misha had her own route *spoilers for Shizune's r

It would be a massive undertaking and there is no way it will happen, but it would be pretty cool if they pulled a "persona 3 portable" and came with a female main character. A lesbian Misha route (or a kenji route) would be pretty epic.
by Machoman
Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 735979

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Actually in publishing terms 40k words is the minimum to be considered a novel. 60k is about average. 100k + books are outliers.
by Machoman
Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Am I the only one who feels that Hanako's arc is overrated?
Replies: 108
Views: 29011

Re: Am I the only one who feels that Kanako's arc is overrat

Yep, Shizune's route is my favorite too, so as you might expect the kind of person that enjoys reading her route wouldn't enjoy Hanako's as much. I don't even have a problem with Hanako, the way Hisao acts in Hanako's route is horrible and makes it impossible to empathize with him.
by Machoman
Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:24 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What do you think about Hisao's personality?
Replies: 54
Views: 14689

Re: What do you think about Hisao's personality?

Which Hisao? I actually wanted to make a thread on this but since you already kind of did I'll just post it here. Hisao's personality varies in the different arcs (usually mirroring the girl). I like Shizune's Hisao best. He actually goes for it and asks her out (the girl pretty much falls into his ...
by Machoman
Sat Jul 28, 2012 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 368440

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

Enjoying what you have so far
by Machoman
Sat Jul 28, 2012 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 735979

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/20)

I think you are being overly critical of yourself. You do first person teenager/young woman narration very well and very believably. You are easily on the skill level of mass market paperbacks in young adult fiction. If you haven't tried writing a book I think you should consider it. I'm writing one...
by Machoman
Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 735979

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/20)

Really like everything so far
by Machoman
Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 80840

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

Went for it in act 1? I like it.