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Big congrats! I hope another cool, positive base develops from this.

Guestimate wrote:Anyone feel like putting up a screengrab for those of us who don't just download whatever they come across?

Glad you fixed the eyes. This is really great

The first chapter was written well enough, but I don't think I can handle another fic with KS characters dying in horrible ways.

I noticed the download file was removed

nemz wrote:My original stupid thought was that Lilly was somehow behind all this

I don't think Doomish would be THAT evil.....right?

It's so beautiful

I've seen few writers write near perfect Rin/Hisao conversations and you sir are one of them

Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)

Well I certainly didn't expect this to reach this level of darkness
Not enough for a "doomish" fic level per se but suicide is big enough
Anyway, I'm still enjoying this and hope for another soon

It saddens me that it seems noone picked up on the numerous Alan Wake esque plot elements throughout this story. Nonetheless, I really hope you're able to continue this soon

I'd like to think it was worth it to potentially ruin any feels i could have with the characters ever again.....I'll have to get back to you on that. Good story nonetheless