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Doomish wrote:I don't think I'm ever going to get enough of this story, even once it finishes. It is so good.

Took the words right outta my mouth... Also, how do you read so fast! 0_o

God damn you Themocaw, the results of your writing are like a drug, euphoric and addicting.

Criticism is welcomed. So criticism shall be given! :mrgreen: No flaws are sticking out like a sore thumb, which is typically a good sign. -giggles- It's a cute story, I'm finding Yaso a somewhat relatable character... As for the rest of the characters, it's adorable how tightly they resemble the c...

Hello. I love what you've done with the characters, especially with Shizune and Sam and I feel you've set yourself up perfectly to tell a truly intriguing reunion. I'm a little bit iffy about Emi's portrayal as being clingy as all hell but I guess you need some element of drama to arise. I'll admit,...

First time reading through this entirely. I can't expresses how much I've enjoyed reading this so far, considering it's overwhelming adorable factor and personification of the other characters, especially Rin. It truly is a pity its taken me so long to come across your work. I hope you plan to conti...

Yaay! I enjoyed that chapter, but now we have to wait another week :( I know aye?! And he's so good at ending each chapter with a cliff hanger too! You're killing us softly Scissorlips, ya' hear!? In all seriousness, keep it up, this is an amazing read and easily better than the routes ingame, I'll...

It doesn't make sense to include choices, if the author doesn't intend to branch the story anyway, because it tears thereadre from the story needlessly. If you intend to write both branches the question is moot, because you will have to include the choice anyway. I'm not a big fan of doing that in ...

I am loving the experience reading this so far, all the characters seem like themselves and the situations so far seem well thought out, which, considering the plot is sill pre-festival, has got my riding the hype train for the next instalment.
Good luck

I am really envious of your writing abilities, I can't put into words how much glee I've gotten from reading the entire thing today. Just one think that made me feel slightly uneasy, I'm not familiar with the timeline but I was kinda thrown by the presence of Lilly, considering the ending of exams a...