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- Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/24
Now You are probably thinking: "The Fuck did I just read!?" Good. That was the plan. Oh gawd! You atmosphere was brilliant however the pacing of your plot left something to be desired. Your one flaw was not writing Kenji in as the Hulk, and with that considered, I give "I am Haiso-ma...
- Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/22
I mentioned I was stuck on a section in the next chapter... Well, I'm jammed on about ten minutes worth of interaction between characters and I've rewritten them... oh... around thirty times so far. I've written everything leading up to it, and most of what happens after, but the little section I'm...
- Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 124227
Re: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
I looked to his epilogue mostly for aesthetics- Shizune's appearance is based his rendition- and the long engagement. The Misha I had wasn't really in line with his Misha, so the two fics couldn't work together as well as I may have liked. Fair enough. My lingering expectations were stuff like Mish...
- Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 124227
Re: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Once again, I have stumbled upon a fanfic I had yet to read and once again I found myself reading it in one sitting then realising its currently 3am, yet still spending an extra 15-20 minutes to come up with a comment... It's a good story, especially your characterisation of Misha, which was both cl...
- Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:06 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)
- Replies: 26
- Views: 27667
Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)
HahahahaLOL WUT wrote: I don't know what the Fuck I am talking about!
So remember kids.
Never trust me when precentages are involved!
You are one peculiar person I must say.
- Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
- Replies: 91
- Views: 43814
Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eleven 7/21/12)
You are an Ass Face, you know that? With each new part we learn more about Hisao, and we progress into Yaso 's life, and then BAM Part is over and I have to wait for the next one. You Cock Tease. Note: ignore everything on the first part of my post. Just stick with the complements before someone ye...
- Sun Jul 22, 2012 2:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Chapter 11 - Soliloquy
Satoru Iwata + Shigeru Miyamoto? Me thinks you're a Nintendo man.Helbereth wrote: Satoru Miyoto
OrmaybetheyarejustcommonnamesandI'mlookingtoomuchintoit ._.
- Sun Jul 22, 2012 2:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
- Replies: 515
- Views: 281148
Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Wow... Just wow. I've read the popular Ascended Flutist's "And to live in peace" , giggling childishly at their cutesy ways the entire time. (Bare with me for a sec, I do plan to go somewhere with this.) I've read Mehkanik's brilliant "After school" epilogue, which is one of the ...
- Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735883
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/20)
“Fine.” I wedge the movies in my elbow and pull my wallet from pocket. As I open it, a single moth flies out, immediately heading for the fluorescent lamps lining the ceiling. We both stare after it for a few long moments. “Did that really just happen?” Hisao asks, continuing to stare. I lol'ed way...
- Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735883
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/20)
OH GAWD!!!?!Total Destruction wrote:ALMOST MAKES ME WANT TO LOOK UP SLEEP FETISH PRONZ BUT I WILL NOT BECAUSE I'M BETTER THAN THAT.
You worry me, mate.
- Thu Jul 19, 2012 5:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/17
"I know good things happen when you cant sleep until 6:30 a.m. everyday!" "Updated at 7:00pm" Helbereth, your timing makes me proud to be Aussie... Not that I'm saying your spout of insomnia is good or anything ._. Oh it's not a spout. I've had insomnia for years (all my life) o...
- Thu Jul 19, 2012 5:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/17
"Updated at 7:00pm"LOL WUT wrote: "I know good things happen when you cant sleep until 6:30 a.m. everyday!"
Helbereth, your timing makes me proud to be Aussie... Not that I'm saying your spout of insomnia is good or anything ._.
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
- Replies: 145
- Views: 80812
Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
I think I'm manly enough to admit this without being judged: When I got the email notification that this had updated... I kinda squealed with glee a little ._. I was kinda hoping Miki and Haiso would join Suzu under the tree but I can't complain with the alternative outcome. Panthour was right in sa...
- Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735883
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)
-Giggles-Scissorlips wrote: I can legitimately say that my sleep schedule has been shot to hell since starting this story (I've also been taking more naps lately, strange)
One could say you've almost become your character.
- Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 492840
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/15
I think you've done very nicely trying to encapsulate the emotional state of Aiko, making her an intriguing and "hug-able" character. That "Almost kiss" scene was squeal-worthy grade adorable and I love Aiko's reaction to Haiso's heartbeat, shrugging it off as normal, that alone ...