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by JTemby
Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 735889

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Two for one sale in the fanfic isle? I can dig it. Soooooooooooooo... Nope, got nothin', everything was prefect, I'm actually more happy with how the failed h-scene turned out in comparison to the alternative. Edit: Oh... Oh god... -sniffles- This was unexpected... Bahahahaha~ , I did call it earlie...
by JTemby
Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 12505

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda

It's commonly thought that he resents Rin (possibly hates) for always being the apple of Nomiya's eye, and starts going out with Molly just before Hisao arrives... But I'mma shut up and let you tell your story. That is the version in one or two other fics around here. It is in no way canon and even...
by JTemby
Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 12505

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda

Diabetes, missing limbs, Autism, Deafness, Muscular Dystrophy, Scoliosis, Boneitis... Wait. Wasn't that last one from a cartoon or something? Out. Shoo thoughts! Bahahaha! Good reference! Suzume can't see the board very well with her partial blindness, so I take her notes for her while she closes h...
by JTemby
Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A story based off a picture- Tea time
Replies: 9
Views: 4200

Re: A story based off a picture- Tea time

BLARGH!
I tried, I really did try, but I have no comment for this piece.
by JTemby
Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 12505

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda

I kinda have this unexplainable hatred for dream sequences, so yeah... But you've already established Azumi as a likeable character and I am quite intrigued as to how you thread her into Yamaku, as well as which social scene she falls into, etc.
Mate, you just earned yourself another sub.
by JTemby
Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Visit to the Hospital-short, humour (warning:DRY)
Replies: 9
Views: 5104

Re: Visit to the Hospital-short, humour (warning:DRY)

Short, sharp and shiny.
Could do more with it, hope you do more with it.
by JTemby
Sun Aug 05, 2012 2:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 80371

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/3]

Another collection read. -Wipes the sleep out of his eyes- 1: The Counterattack. I don't think I've ever laughed as much as I did reading this, especially in that climax. You really handled the characters respectfully and how you handled Kenji was spot on . 2: Yamaku's Class Commencement Speech. I h...
by JTemby
Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 56707

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02

Comparing Sam to Lynda from United States of Misha (As well as some aspects of Misha's personality) I can't help but think Misha ending up with Shizune 2.0 after all this time, really downplays the complexity of the character as neither Lynda nor Kelly represented Shizune beyond the most minimalisti...
by JTemby
Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 492845

Re: Chapter 15 - Nightmares (part 2)

Seeing that grin, I reach for my phone and hit redial. A second later his phone starts playing a familiar song of Final Fantasy origin . Picking up in the flourish of the second verse, I start singing along with the lyrics, “ I kind of liked it your way, how you shyly placed your eyes on me; did yo...
by JTemby
Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 492845

Re: Chapter 15 - Nightmares (part 2)

Seeing that grin, I reach for my phone and hit redial. A second later his phone starts playing a familiar song of Final Fantasy origin . Picking up in the flourish of the second verse, I start singing along with the lyrics, “ I kind of liked it your way, how you shyly placed your eyes on me; did yo...
by JTemby
Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43816

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Complete 8/1/12)

I've come to the decision that I'm going to rewrite Chapter Twelve, not just edit some things here and there but rewrite it. So where does that leave the current chapter twelve? I can't make you guys unsee it. I'm going to take the main points from that version and rework into something new and imp...
by JTemby
Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 281149

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Could you give me a tl;dr? 10 hours seems kinda long Takes place just after Hanako's good ending and deals with how Hanako handles Lilly's decision to leave for Scotland. If that's all and there's 17 chapters then those chapters must be kinda short It explores theories of which I bring up in argume...
by JTemby
Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 281149

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

themocaw wrote:And now i'm done.

I remove the qualifier. This is the best Hanako epilogue I've ever read.

Hell, it might even be the best KS epilogue fanfic I've ever read.
That's the most easily agreeable statement I've heard all year.
by JTemby
Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 56707

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02

Oh looky here I found a keyboard that isn't stuck on caps lock and can actually use the A key. Although it looks like it is from the 17th century. What? But anyways I am glad to see it is not dead. You had me worrying for a moment there Helbereth. :lol: What?! Haven't you been reading Tomorrow's Do...
by JTemby
Thu Aug 02, 2012 2:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43816

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Complete 8/1/12)

I'm starting to see where your plot is going... but I'm REALLY hoping I'm still a complete thickhead and that you'll end up surprising the shit outta me. I do have a few things planned for the end of Act 1 and for the Act 2. I hope I don't disappoint. She nods. "My real name isn't Midori Kagam...