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Mirage_GSM wrote: You slipped up the perspective once towards the end:

Strong fingers worked at paint stains, old and new, scrubbed away aches Rin hadn’t realized she had.

Otherwise nice story.

Seems fine to me. Hisao's fingers, scrubbing Rin. Makes perfect sense.

Whoa. Yeah, I didn't even notice the twist. Wasn't until I read Mirage's post that I realized I'd missed something...

Snicket wrote:hasta la vista baby



thought i'd try something a bid different here. Also i toned down the gore, so everyone is happy.

Perfect. Permission to make this my avatar?

You do know that in Shizune's route Yuuko tells Hisao that she didn't go to school at Yamaku, right? Crap. Umm. . . NAME'S THE SAME, DIFFERENT CHARACTER! :D . . . maybe if I stay very quiet they'll believe it. Oh yeah, definitely believable given that if the other students we know would still be ...

I liked it. Rin never struck me as the suicidal type for some reason, but having her do it as an expression of art definitely seemed to be in character. Having Hisao call at just the right time was a somewhat predictable fix, but it had to happen. I have to agree that the title could've been a ...

VCR wrote:>School swimsuit sailor uniform loli maid with prosthetic legs (in kneesocks), twintails, cat ears and eyeglasses.
MY GOD

EDIT: THIS IS WHAT YOU HAVE WROUGHT AURA:
http://twitpic.com/2507gg

The picture isn't appearing for me...

I'm not sure what the proper length of time is before it's been too long to review something without it being necroposting, which is why I prefer Fanfiction.net to posting fanfics in forums, but this was so good that I figured I'd risk it. Unlike this Bob person, I'm a fan of Rin's, and I thought ...

Maybe you could make it as "it's a wonderful life" style tale where Hisao winds up seeing what would have happened if he hadn't come to Yamaku, and is given a chance to make things right. Do you think you might do that? If you just do it as is, it would be a really depressing story. A mysterious ...

Nice. "Misinterpretation" was absolutely wonderful; perfectly done. Also loved the series with Natsumi, even if I can't quite figure out which route, if any, it's supposed to be on (at first when Rin referred to Emi's "pet project", I assumed it was on Emi's route, but then we get to lunchtime and ...

Well thinking on it. Wouldn't she be illegal? Actually how old are these girls? They'd probly be illegal in the USA. Maybe not in Europe? I'm fairly certain they're all around 17, except for Lilly, who would be 18. 17 is legal in some parts of the US (Texas, for example) and 18 is the general age ...