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- Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 14823
Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Suzu route has an approximate total of 162,187 words. Rika route has an approximate total of 44,362 words. (All these numbers may be inaccurate). So, consider how much you're comfortable writing per month. 10,000 words? That's 16 months for a Suzu-length route. 5,000 words? That's 9 months for a Ri...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 1:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 973917
Re: Yamaku Book Club
It is...?Sea wrote:It is doneComrade wrote:Damn. A banner already?
People, what do you think about having a club member's list? with people who are members get the right to vote on the topic of the next meeting and other important stuff.
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 12:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 973917
Re: Yamaku Book Club
(it's not just cripple porn)Craftyatom wrote:
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 14284
Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Additionally:
Oh, bother...
Now you've gone and made me replace my long-standing assumption that Mutou would sound like Ben Stein with that of Alton Brown."Oh bother," Mutou muttered under his breath before he shook his head.
Oh, bother...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 14284
Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
I considered commenting on that, but I had Aiko mistake them for green when they first met. In case the author just made a mistake, Hisao's eyes are supposed to be mid-range brown.bhtooefr wrote:Since when did Hisao have blue eyes?Armchair Legend wrote:The newcomer's bluish-green eyes met the young man's blue eyes.
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 14823
Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Please, as a beginning writer myself, I beseech thee: Write before you post. Yes, this. Nobody knows who you are, so saying you're a writer, are working on a book, or whatever else does nothing to inspire anticipation. At best it puts undue expectations on your shoulders, and at worst it insults yo...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 973917
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Maybe we can do this in an organized way and have sea choose a subject for every "meeting" I'm game with this, let me think, I'll choose some fic I read of a acceptable level of awesomeness, and I'll take suggestions, and give everybody a day to read or if it's something longer like the S...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 442283
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}
She’s so preposterously beautiful that I nearly find myself wondering if Hanako hired an actress to pose as her friend before I remember how stupid that is. It's nitpicking, but I'd end that sentence with 'sounds' rather than 'is'. The rest reads reasonably well, so you shouldn't be so hard on your...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 7:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 14823
Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Ive had images of Iwanako and Kenji arguing, ive dreamt of who Iwanako would be after the heart attack, and I really want to put those dreams and these images I keep having into a story. First, Iwanako is a blank slate in terms of canon. All that's known about her is that she apparently has long da...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 6:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 507083
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 02/21/14 ~ C.44 - Sojourn
Nothing you say will make me take that part out. Why? Is the character going to be plot relevant later? No, I just like the banter. Without it there's no setup for Yoko's line about fairy-tale princesses, and Aiko's indignation over treating the driver like a second class citizen doesn't make as mu...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 5:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 973917
Re: Yamaku Book Club
I think that the most natural segue into any kind of story involving her would stem from the only route she actually made any real appearance in. From the Hanako route? I'm interested. These two started in that vein, but it was abandoned before it got anywhere: Touchdown Breakdown – epilogue by Tot...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 2:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
- Replies: 496
- Views: 391082
Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -18/2/14
Here's all those recommended fics I listed on the book club thread that apparently aren't in the archive: [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6632]Reunion[/url][/b] – epilogue by [b]spirizu[/b] (completed, 1262 words) [b]PoV: [/b]Shizune; [b]Pairings: [/b]none; [b]Begins: [/b]sometim...
- Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 83513
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
I would like to comment on this, but I don't recall where I left off with this story...
- Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 973917
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Hey, all! I've been thinking about posting my FF.net fic over to here, but I've no idea how to do the posting thing. Do I post replies, or what? I also write from a mobile device, so it just becomes more confusing for some uncanny reason. If anybody could tell me, it'd be much appreciated. Sent you...
- Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 507083
Re: Chapter 44 - Sojourn (part 4)
Yeah, we're obviously talking past each other. I was trying to say something along the lines of "in my opinion, this act feels like a sidetrack from the story you've been telling up until now, and thus might have worked better as one or more stories separate from TD proper instead of as part o...