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by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 14823

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

Suzu route has an approximate total of 162,187 words. Rika route has an approximate total of 44,362 words. (All these numbers may be inaccurate). So, consider how much you're comfortable writing per month. 10,000 words? That's 16 months for a Suzu-length route. 5,000 words? That's 9 months for a Ri...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973917

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Sea wrote:
Comrade wrote:Damn. A banner already?

People, what do you think about having a club member's list? with people who are members get the right to vote on the topic of the next meeting and other important stuff.
It is done
It is...?
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973917

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Craftyatom wrote:Image
(it's not just cripple porn)
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Replies: 41
Views: 14284

Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!

Additionally:
"Oh bother," Mutou muttered under his breath before he shook his head.
Now you've gone and made me replace my long-standing assumption that Mutou would sound like Ben Stein with that of Alton Brown.

Oh, bother...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Replies: 41
Views: 14284

Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!

bhtooefr wrote:
Armchair Legend wrote:The newcomer's bluish-green eyes met the young man's blue eyes.
Since when did Hisao have blue eyes?
I considered commenting on that, but I had Aiko mistake them for green when they first met. In case the author just made a mistake, Hisao's eyes are supposed to be mid-range brown.
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 14823

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

Please, as a beginning writer myself, I beseech thee: Write before you post. Yes, this. Nobody knows who you are, so saying you're a writer, are working on a book, or whatever else does nothing to inspire anticipation. At best it puts undue expectations on your shoulders, and at worst it insults yo...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973917

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Maybe we can do this in an organized way and have sea choose a subject for every "meeting" I'm game with this, let me think, I'll choose some fic I read of a acceptable level of awesomeness, and I'll take suggestions, and give everybody a day to read or if it's something longer like the S...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 442283

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

She’s so preposterously beautiful that I nearly find myself wondering if Hanako hired an actress to pose as her friend before I remember how stupid that is. It's nitpicking, but I'd end that sentence with 'sounds' rather than 'is'. The rest reads reasonably well, so you shouldn't be so hard on your...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 7:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 14823

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

Ive had images of Iwanako and Kenji arguing, ive dreamt of who Iwanako would be after the heart attack, and I really want to put those dreams and these images I keep having into a story. First, Iwanako is a blank slate in terms of canon. All that's known about her is that she apparently has long da...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 6:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 507083

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 02/21/14 ~ C.44 - Sojourn

Nothing you say will make me take that part out. Why? Is the character going to be plot relevant later? No, I just like the banter. Without it there's no setup for Yoko's line about fairy-tale princesses, and Aiko's indignation over treating the driver like a second class citizen doesn't make as mu...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 5:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973917

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I think that the most natural segue into any kind of story involving her would stem from the only route she actually made any real appearance in. From the Hanako route? I'm interested. These two started in that vein, but it was abandoned before it got anywhere: Touchdown Breakdown – epilogue by Tot...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 2:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 391082

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -18/2/14

Here's all those recommended fics I listed on the book club thread that apparently aren't in the archive: [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6632]Reunion[/url][/b] – epilogue by [b]spirizu[/b] (completed, 1262 words) [b]PoV: [/b]Shizune; [b]Pairings: [/b]none; [b]Begins: [/b]sometim...
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 83513

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up

I would like to comment on this, but I don't recall where I left off with this story...
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973917

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Hey, all! I've been thinking about posting my FF.net fic over to here, but I've no idea how to do the posting thing. Do I post replies, or what? I also write from a mobile device, so it just becomes more confusing for some uncanny reason. If anybody could tell me, it'd be much appreciated. Sent you...
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 507083

Re: Chapter 44 - Sojourn (part 4)

Yeah, we're obviously talking past each other. I was trying to say something along the lines of "in my opinion, this act feels like a sidetrack from the story you've been telling up until now, and thus might have worked better as one or more stories separate from TD proper instead of as part o...