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by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 216410

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

Mine don't speak to me, but they argue among themselves almost constantly. As far as Amaya is concerned, I should have had Aiko and Hisao shacking up way back in act 2 before the beach trip. Tadao thinks I should write everything in iambic pentameter. Most of what Naoko says is beyond my scope of un...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 442268

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

I don't know any of them, so I just see what's there.
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 2:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 148
Views: 171478

Re: Katawa Kijo

Normally I don't perform necromancy, but I think in this thread's case I'll make an exception - I'm sure Kenji would approve. This was started and finished before my time, and has been bumped to the front several times since, but I've never looked into it beyond reading the title. I'll be honest, it...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 216410

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

It's almost unfortunate that I, as a writer, seem consigned to exist outside of the emotional spectrum of my work. You and me both. Although I've developed quite an attachment to my characters, and I want to see them succeed, I have to be objective as a storyteller. They're going to fail sometimes,...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 1:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Replies: 41
Views: 14284

Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!

He grinned somewhat maniacally. "AND I AM A LAAAARGE HAAAAAAM! MILK THE GIANT COOOOOOW," he roared, as he held his arms to the sky. And you want to pair this oaf with Hanako of all people? She's going to run as soon as he comes in sight^^° Hisao copying this strange behaviour is also way ...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 9:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 442268

Re: Moar Leaty Chat

I hate Wuthering Heights more than most people hate Hitler. I'm actually really keen on Jane Austen, but fuck the Brontës. Or at least Charlotte and Emily. Screw Colin Firth, too, while I'm at it. It was a damned shock when I realized I was basically writing a modern version of those sort of books....
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 25, 2014 7:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 442268

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

Well that was a dumb thing to go and give away...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 11:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 442268

Re: Moar Leaty Chat

What I would like to think is that if Hanako's behavior feels unusual in this scene, it's because she finds herself in a scenario completely unlike anything in the visual novel, not because I screwed up and made her too personable. And, again, remember that we're looking at Hanako from the perspect...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 10:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 216410

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

I briefly glade back at the clock. Glance, perhaps? Glade is a forest clearing. That's the only flaw of note I located. Apart from that, please ignore the stream of negativity concerning the tone of the tale. It's well-written, feels real, and seems to perfectly suit the Kagami we've learned a litt...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973892

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Ok, let me sort out some things here, first and foremost this thread is a book club yes, but secondarily it's to help clear up all the threads with huge amounts of discussion between chapters and no navigational system installed. I will clearly label and link to the meetings on the OP, and if every...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973892

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Usually if I'm reading a multi-chapter story here, I don't bother reading the comments until I've finished the story itself. It's usually only the ones still 'in progress' that I end up reading interim comments, and that's because the later chapters have yet to be published. It's kinda related to so...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973892

Re: Yamaku Book Club

griffon8 wrote:
Helbereth wrote:Edit: Thus far my major problem is its complete lack of navigation links.
Each chapter is linked in the first post, so you should be able to figure out a way around that.
Still not a very convenient setup.
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 24, 2014 12:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973892

Re: Yamaku Book Club

It response to the question, the reading period could go for 2 weeks, it depends upon the fic we choose, and through the magical powers of the Library and randomly scrolling down and clicking a link, the first fic shall be: Katawa Kijo - Route by Mirage_GSM (completed, 46.862 words) PoV: Hisao; Pai...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Best Case Scenario
Replies: 10
Views: 5295

Re: Best Case Scenario

After staring into the other's eyes for a bit, I finally enter the bathroom and look at my reflection. My hair is chin length in the back, and my bangs cover my forehead. My hair is a dark chocolate brown, and my eyes match that color. I am caucasian due to my father being of American descent, and ...
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 973892

Re: Yamaku Book Club

No, because there's absolutely no way anyone could ever possibly finish Tomorrow's Doom in three days, at least not without completely cutting themselves off from life. I might be biased in that regard... I finished it in a bit under 8 hours excluding breaks, about the time required for LotR. Yes, ...