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Suddenly I'm reminded of the attempt to use the rumor mill in American Pie and how well that worked out for the guy. "This one time... at Yamaku..." Some twisted definition as to what constitutes a bad rumour... I know I wouldn't forgive her so easily for something like that. Understandab...

====================================================== Act 1-3: The rumors of my swag have been greatly exaggerated... ====================================================== Friday passes uneventfully and now only one day remains before the festival. A nervous energy hangs in the air throughout the ...

Hi everyone, so I'm back with another chapter. Well... more like a scene that wound up turning into a chapter. I decided I wanted to release this on its own instead of lumping it together with the festival scene. For your convenience, this version is presented to you in luxurious, easy-to-read, DOUB...

Next to Shizune, Rin is my second least favorite character. Despite that, I actually enjoyed this quite a bit and thought it was rather cute.
Just work on tightening up some of the things that others have already pointed out and you'll have yourself a nice solid one-shot.

Well you already know most of what I think about this, man, but excellent job again. I look forward to these updates more every time.

( list of incredibly derpy mistakes ) Thank you, sir. All of those are very good catches. I may have to recruit you... 'go out on a limb' Oh god oh god. That wasn't intentional, I swear. I've been trying to be careful with those... I blame being "in the zone" and getting too in touch with...

Thanks for all your comments and support, everyone! Just a little request, could you separate your sentences, like your first part? When it's just a wall of text it's much harder to read. Haha, I guess it's a good sign when the only major criticism so far is on... double spacing. I apologize for tha...

=================================== Act 1-2: What Goes Around =================================== One uncomfortably long walk later, I find myself in the head nurse’s office. His normally friendly and reassuring smile had turned into a strict frown as soon as he opened the door and saw me slumped ov...

I think I'm going to have to get used to stuff turning out to be much longer than I planned it. That's writing, I guess. As promised, here is the second chapter of my Miki route . I hope you enjoy! ( Questions, comments, and critique are always welcome ) I should add that I've also updated the main ...

I'm basically saying that I think the first chapter would flow better if it started from Slow Recovery instead of Cold War. That's how I would have written that chapter if I were brave enough to write a Miki branch. Don't mind me; I dwell way too much on conceptual purity. Ahhh, got it. Thank you f...

Oh wow, this thread. I go away to brainstorm for a bit and then suddenly: whatthefuckamireading.jpg Leaty, I give you serious props for playing Devil's advocate and the amount of attention you have to detail, but honestly the intent behind half of what you said has completely gone over my head. I'd ...

Hisao growing a pair makes this a killer fiction. Miki being Miki is just delicious chocolate icing on the cake. Yeah I'm still really amped on that scene and the fact that themocaw agreed to let me use it. It's so perfect. Unfortunately, in order to make later character development go smoothly, I'...

I think this has gotten off to a good start, hopefully this won't end up like the other Miki routes and fall off the grid. Hope to see updates before too long. Yeah that's what I'm hoping too. That's actually why I wanted to get this posted right off--so that I'd have a way of holding myself accoun...

I bloody love this. Continue, please! Thank you kindly. I'll do what I can to keep the ball rolling on this one. The massive walls of dialogue with no description of even how the words are being said or by whom are slightly off putting, but a good start nonetheless. Yep. You got me. This is me actu...

========================================== Author's Note I've decided to throw my hand into the mix (horrible pun intended) for the privilege of writing a Miki route. I'm not that great a writer, but spending time in KSG and Crispychat has inspired me to try and get on the level of all the other awe...