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I don't think the kiss means much, really. Miki seems the type to do that just for the fun of it, without consequences. A bit of promiscuity plays right into her tomboyish character. I'm not saying it couldn't develop from there, but I don't think people should read into it too much. *tents fingers...

And Meadows? I think the extra effort put into the fireworks scene was well spent. :) Thank you, I'm glad it shows. I'm sort of just getting back into writing and am still moving out of that weird phase where you have to fumble for the right words to get the image in your head across. Went for it i...

I was kinda hoping Miki and Haiso would join Suzu under the tree but I can't complain with the alternative outcome. Yeah I kind of wanted them to do that as well. Unfortunately, since this is a Miki route, Suzu gets to ride in the backseat. But since Snoozu is adorable and shouldn't be ignored, Sci...

Very interesting. Most would argue there's really no point in writing this since everyone can guess how it went based on the info from the game, but I think there's good potential to explore the tragedy and how that molded Emi into the person she is. Two things you might want to consider: - Emi is 1...

So I was tempted just to post this picture and leave that as an expression of how I feel when you release new chapters. Apt as it may be, I guess you probably want some words. I should probably ask Yuuko for help but she's currently choking on a sandwich that she had been trying to eat as stealthily...

Sorry I didn't give a hand proofing this one, I was pretty tied up with some other stuff so I didn't have much free time. I didn't get to tell you the other day but this chapter came out better than you made it out to be, sure festival scenes are always pretty similar but I still enjoyed this. I di...

================================= Act 1-4: Higher Ground ================================= Despite my best efforts to fight against it, the combination of light pouring through my curtains and the noise outside is enough to draw me back into the waking world. I end up stumbling out of bed, glancing ...

This took way longer than it ever should have, and I struggled with it a lot. I blame Act 1 and its plot constraints for completely killing my mojo. It's the last chapter of Act 1, so I wanted to take the time to get it done right, rather than get it done fast. In my mind, the events in this chapter...

The things I do with my time that I really should be spending writing... Oh well, it's for a good cause.

Artwork isn't mine, just found it somewhere else and immediately thought of this story.

Kayo12 wrote:You should read 'Bowl of Noodles'.

Ah, well now I feel kind of stupid. That puts things in perspective.

And we don't talk about that fic.

Yeah, sorry. I regret bringing it up. Not as much as I regret reading it, though.

• Mutou has a thug-like brother that randomly shows up
• He knows Saki
• Saki is not happy to see him

You best not be going where I think you're going with this... ala 'Watch, or Don't Watch'

Mmmmm, nothing like a nice fresh batch of spaghetti in the morning. The fact that Suzu was trying to hide Hisao when she didn't really need to was hilarious, and made for a great scene. The return of the reaper was rather surprising and I think it fits well with the doubt/uncertainty/lack-of-confide...

It'll tear readers out of the story, and considering the nature of a lot of the dialogue/route choices, it'll likely do so at a point where you want readers sucked into the story the most. You're building up conflict, the reader gets real into the story, then all of a sudden there's an off formatte...

When you say that you are going to write a neutral and bad ending do you mean alongside a good ending or just a neutral and bad ending with no good ending Haha, I'd be a right proper dick if I did that, wouldn't I? No, I meant that I would write those in addition to the good ending. I can't help bu...

Yes but it's a fanfic OF a VN, so it's sensible. It isn't a CYOA if the author fully intends to flesh out all the choices regardless of what the audience might choose, as has been done repeatedly in other 'route' fics. This. The choices would already be made (or I guess I'm the one making them, tec...