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by spirizu
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nomiya POV
Replies: 2
Views: 2566

Nomiya POV

Well, themocaw already did it , but I wanted to see if I could lend a little bit of humanity to everyone's favourite nemesis. Let me know how I got on. (Couldn't think of a title). _________________________________________________________________ I should have handled that better. Shinichi Nomiya, f...
by spirizu
Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 6634516

Re: Ask!

Apologies if any of these have already been asked: 1. How have the devs found settling back into "normal" life after the game's release? I imagine that finishing something that you've been working on for something like 20 hours a week (according to cpl_crud's blog) for 5 years must leave a...
by spirizu
Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 22034

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

“Okay, I think. I made the mistake of explaining to Setou that there was no such thing as masculine and feminine nouns in English: they’re all just nouns. He accused me of planning to castrate all the males in the class and ran out screaming. No problems otherwise.” Japanese doesn't have different ...
by spirizu
Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 22034

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi)

Just a little update. I seem to be getting hooked. _______________________________________________________________ “Farting?” I barely suppress a sigh as a burst of laughter ripples around the classroom. Miura’s laugh is almost loud enough to rouse Suzuki from her neverending slumber. Suzuki … more ...
by spirizu
Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Turn to Stone
Replies: 19
Views: 9886

Re: Turn to Stone

I'm technically in work, so I'll keep this sort. Even though I read Touchdown Breakdown first, I thoroughly enjoyed this too, typos and all. I've yet to read a Miki POV that I didn't like, but Miki's reaction to Hanako brushing her off hints at an underlying vulnerability around people that I haven'...
by spirizu
Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 20302

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

I liked this. I'd already considered that Hanako's "bad end" was the best thing for her , but it hadn't occurred to me that it might be good for Hisao too. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. And now for pettiness: I haven't seen the guy in a minute. Is this a typo? Doesn't seem to ma...
by spirizu
Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 22034

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi)

Yay, Miyagi! Two small nitpicks: Hisao is in class 3-3, and plains are sometimes planes. 3-3, right. I can never bloody remember. Thanks for that. I'm sticking with "plains", though. Makes me picture some sort of astral desert. :P “My name is Hisao Nakai and I like pussy.” I knew right aw...
by spirizu
Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 112601

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

>Check e-mails Hello spirizu, You are receiving this notification because you are watching the topic, "Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route" at "Katawa Shoujo Forums". This topic has received a reply since your last visit >Meh, could be anything. Better check, though. >OMG, it's been upd...
by spirizu
Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 22034

Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Just thought I'd lash out something with a little dose of sweetness. Hope ye like it. (And I'm perfectly aware that the transit of Venus took place in 2012, not 2007. It's not canon :P ) __________________________________________________________________________________________ Starbursts “My name is...
by spirizu
Sun Jul 08, 2012 4:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The best song ever
Replies: 4
Views: 2492

Re: The best song ever

Best ASL/music crossover?

Easy:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sv3tadz5Q3o

(NSFW)
by spirizu
Sat Jul 07, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 742259

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/4)

*pants heavily, sweat pouring down forehead* Right. Finally. I've caught up. Fifty. Thousand. Words. Later. I didn't want to comment before I was fully up-to-date. I don't really have anything new to add, but this is such a great arc that it's only fair to give something back. Forgive the lack of or...
by spirizu
Thu Jun 21, 2012 10:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 15
Views: 13613

Re: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)

Hmm... I read the edited version, and I still have no idea what happened. The sequence of events doesn't seem to make sense. If the letter is two weeks old and Shizune has visited the grave before, she has to have died immediately after sending it. Or is this Shonadu place supposed to be the land o...
by spirizu
Thu Jun 21, 2012 7:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 15
Views: 13613

Re: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)

Thanks for the feedback, guys. I guess I should have polished the draft a little more. I hope it's a little clearer now. Did Misha kill herself? I've deliberately refrained from specifying outright whether or not that happened. I think a close re-reading of Shizune's thoughts might be a better way o...
by spirizu
Wed Jun 20, 2012 8:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 15
Views: 13613

Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)

Reunion I drowsily blink myself awake as the light of the morning sun streams through the panes of my windows, shining directly into my eyes. A quick glance at my samurai alarm clock (a typically thoughtless birthday present from Dad last year: at least we both like samurai) confirms the time as 7....
by spirizu
Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phoenix (Hanako Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 5303

Re: Phoenix (Hanako Bad End one-shot)

Thanks for the feedback. This was the first piece of fiction I wrote since a school assignment when I was 15 (I'm 28 now...), so the compliments are more than welcome. I had really only intended this fic to answer my own question of "What happened after she threw Hisao out?", rather than t...