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by ProfAllister
Wed Sep 05, 2018 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519239

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/5/18)

Sunday morning. No swimming today, but the habit of early mornings is pretty solidly established now. Since it’s my routine every other day of the week, I’ve taken a liking to wandering the grounds early Sunday mornings. While it’s normally deserted at this time anyway, it somehow feels even more de...
by ProfAllister
Sun Jul 29, 2018 8:11 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 39401

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

Looking up when Marine day would have been in 2007, it would have been the 23rd July, the third Monday of July which would put the 3-day weekend between 21st-23rd. On yours you have it the week prior. Is that due to the game? Everything I've looked at has pointed toward 16 July. What's your source ...
by ProfAllister
Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67185

Re: Yet another one-shot thread

Still digesting this, but a few things stick out: - You seem to have done a fair bit of research, so good on you. - Placing this scene in present tense feels... off. A constant present tense narration carries a sense of dynamism that, set against the mode of "dialog->reaction" seems to bre...
by ProfAllister
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 52603

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I'm starting to think this discussion about floor numbers learns toward derailment... More to the point, there are literally hundreds of possible ways to assign room numbers. You mention the floor below Hisao's having a leading 0 as both a possibility and an impossibility, but I addressed that oddit...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 06, 2018 10:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 948777

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180702 Phantom Pains)

Mirrors of the Sun What struck me the most about this is that it is far clearer than in KS proper that English is not Aura's native language. Other than that, is was a competent work. Not really much to say. Heartbreak Setting aside the fact that 6 months after Lilly's departure would place this in...
by ProfAllister
Thu Jul 05, 2018 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519239

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 6/9/18)

The first thing I notice when I wake up is Misha's distinct scent surrounding me. When I open my eyes, though, she's nowhere to be seen. With a soft sigh, I remind myself that she and Shizune left yesterday afternoon, along with Lilly and Akira. That part still confuses me, but I guess they are fami...
by ProfAllister
Thu Jun 28, 2018 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
Replies: 97
Views: 61281

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 6/28/18)

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole (You Are Her...
by ProfAllister
Tue Jun 26, 2018 10:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Day In the Life
Replies: 14
Views: 5483

Re: A Day In the Life

"I have been to your school. Really... The students there..." I can already think of about a million things he might say, and I'm preparing for my heart to sink on hearing any of them. It's funny, they are probably things I've thought before. "They don't even have cleaning duty."...
by ProfAllister
Sun Jun 17, 2018 10:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
Replies: 27
Views: 19619

Re: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?

I'm somewhat inclined to take the interpretation that Jigoro and Hideaki are actually quite normal, to some extent. Jigoro's a little eccentric, granted, but he's clearly a successful and wealthy businessman (and likely single father). As I'm fond of pointing out, his first impression of Hisao is pr...
by ProfAllister
Sun Jun 17, 2018 8:52 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Slow Recovery / No Recovery ?
Replies: 3
Views: 3765

Re: Slow Recovery / No Recovery ?

Probably just a quirk of the scripting to avoid redundant text and make all the logic gates work properly. They could either have had the first section "Slow Recovery" with the choice hidden behind a logic gate, or alternately had the script in "No Recovery" drop into "Slow ...
by ProfAllister
Sun Jun 17, 2018 7:41 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Slow Recovery / No Recovery ?
Replies: 3
Views: 3765

Re: Slow Recovery / No Recovery ?

A technicality is why you see "Slow Recovery". To actually get "Slow Recovery" to count in your library, you need to essentially be actively be pursuing both Shizune and Emi - the key feature of the "Slow Recovery" event is forcing Hisao to choose between Shizune and Em...
by ProfAllister
Sat Jun 16, 2018 8:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
Replies: 27
Views: 19619

Re: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?

Ah, this discussion again. Always fun. From my most recent read, I am currently of the opinion that Shizune's route "ends" with "The Summit". The next three scenes are epilogue - tying up the loose ends, reaching conclusions, etc. Also, you're missing a key detail with even prese...
by ProfAllister
Thu Jun 14, 2018 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 1924539

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

You can call this my "Grand Unified Theory of Writing with the Audience in Mind" or something. I see writing as working with audience goodwill, a limited resource. Every reader comes in with a different amount. When you write something they like, you accumulate more goodwill; when you writ...
by ProfAllister
Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 948777

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180528 'The Ties That Bind')

My guesses on the codes: emi - No idea, so I'll go with your guess of "Emi" emm - Emi's Mom (has got it going on) hi - Hisao nk - Nurse-kun nosex - Nostralith Exordium, Winged Terror of the Seven Hells Well, first things first - this is old. Old old. SPaG issues here and there, and a sever...
by ProfAllister
Tue Jun 12, 2018 4:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519239

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)

I'll admit I'm a bit confused regarding Hisao's health - he wasn't immediately knocked out as a result of the fall down the stairs, but passed out afterwards. Furthermore, he remained unconscious for a good few hours, even while being given CPR/taken to the nurse's office. That makes sense if his h...