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The ideas are there, the dialogue just seems so... unatural and awkward, like they say things that don't really need to be said.

I just read all of this again I'm loving it so far and can't wait to see where it goes, nice job!

And here we... go. Haha. This is the first of your writing that I've (knowingly) read, but I already believe you have the technical skill to pull this off. Before Miki even showed up I was wishing this could have happened in the game. You're a braver man than I for stepping into knowingly contested...

FishyBroski wrote:I lol'd at the noodle incident

Hahaa yeah I hope Scissorlips brings up some of the other memories Suzu and Miki have shared, like the 2 he has already done, I enjoyed the back story and their friendship.

Yume Miru Kusuri - It has more H content and less paths but quite interesting and at some points heart warming nonetheless

I agree with Mirage concerning the order of the Next, Previous and First links.
Also, great start to the Act, and that conversation Miki has with Suzu's dad just seems to fit her character so well.

I saw a few posts about it on RPS and Kotaku, not the best places to get into VNs but I worked none the less.

What's happening with this, I was really enjoying it but it's been over a month and nothing

I love the way Suzu is depicted in this, you have developed quite the character and i'm loving the story so far Scissorlips, take your time!

Knowing there is a sequel in the works is great and I loved this story as Emi is my favorite, just don't kill anyone off Mountaineer and I think I will be okay.