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This story


especially the Proposal moment made me grin like an idiot, but that could be because I proposed to my girlfriend (now my fiancee) about 2 weeks ago.

For some reason I can't shake the feeling I've read this before...

Nonetheless, well-written.

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Well...

In all honesty I think drawing chibi Hanakos is cute and all, but adding text is unnecessary...

Oh wait, this thread has pretty much derailed.

My suggestion? Lock it... Big time, nothing good will come out of internet fights.

OtakuNinja wrote:When you update the page every 5 seconds to see if there're any new posts. Yeah, I'm bored.

I know your pain bro

Also, when you have your girlfriend knit a gold-and-red scarf cause you claim to be the last sane man in an insane world

Shadowyeclipse wrote:
1 ticket to hell, please.

"1 one-way ticket to hell, allround. That'll be 666 dollars please."

I can imagine Rin putting some sort of jet turbine on the back of a wheelchair somehow, and speeding down the street at mach 2 with the biggest "Does not give a fuck" face ever.

...Why am I reminded of a friend of mine?
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Oh right.
*He wakes in hospital, severe fractures in both legs ...

And as a matter of fact I will be proposing at the day of our 4 anniversery.

Don't go looking for a girl that is perfect for you... Look for a girl that takes you for who you are.

Inb4 she browses your internet history and the surprise is spoiled.

Also, wouldn't that girl be the perfect one ...

I'm gonna post another voice of support an affirmation.

Yes Elpreda, such love does exist. Like some others here, I claim to be living proof of that.
I'm currently 20 (21 in January) and I've been dating my girl for a solid 3 years, 9 months and 5 day at this particular moment.
It hasn't always ...

I like this story.
And Shizune and Misha Dating?
Emi married and expecting a child?

Nope, Lilly mentions that Hanako experiments with cooking but doesn't always succeeds, I'm not sure the route though...

I need to look more at big picture when I proofread, I think. I'll touch that up a bit later tonight.

You might consider approaching someone (preferably someone that has played KS) to be your proofreader. Proof-reading your own stories is good, but you may not happen to spot all the flaws ...

NAICE! :D

I really liked the scenes, especially the memory/dream part, it gives a bit insight on Lilly's life as a child.
Also glad you worked out the faith-aspect of Lilly.

One remark though, the moment the story switched from memory/dream to present/being awake is a bit confusing, I had to ...

VNs in general, KS is the first VN I've ever played/read.

The fan-base here :D Everyone here is awesome :D

Writing. After reading several fan-fics I decided to try my hand on it first chapter is online, look up Lowlands Cyclops in the fanfiction section

Jazz-clubs, never thought of it, let ...

Oddball wrote:I'm a little bit wary about this character myself, but I'm willing to give it a chance.

Well, thank you fo the vote of trust here.

In the second paragraph, I'd use "it" for the second music player.
edited, thank you for spotting it and pointing it out.

Otherwise no complaints so far, but try to avoid making your OC into a mary sue - there are some early indications for that...
Your warning is taken into consideration. 8 ...