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- Sat Sep 14, 2013 2:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 785150
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 14 up 9/13
Yay new chapter! Possible grammar error here below. After my sprints and a quick visit to the nurse, I make my way up to the girls' dorm. As I open the door to my room, a familiar voice Rins out from across the hall. Things are heating up, but I guess Emi would be driven to massage Hisao if she felt ...
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 785150
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]
Oh man, I love this fic. I like both Emi and Hanako, and it's strange to root for them both. I'm glad Hisao's making the choice and not me. Although some part of me still holds out hope for a reconciliation with Lilly. Surely she should realise she still loves him, doesn't she? Anyway with my luck ...
- Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198462
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)
Just popping in to say that I've just finished reading this fic and I like it very much. I particularly enjoyed Hanako's characterisation as an intelligent and observant person while being too shy to actually show it outwardly. Even seasoned comic book writers and novelists and movie scriptwriters ...
- Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 04/02)
- Replies: 57
- Views: 20579
Re: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 03/01)
Keep up the good work! I've reversed my opinion of OC fics, Hisao is such a bland character (admittedly intentionally, and by design) that it's refreshing to see other characters with more personality interact with the girls at Yamaku.
- Tue Mar 26, 2013 12:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 380089
Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
I just discovered this a few days ago and what a brilliant story. Like Rin's route, I feel I should go back and 'play' it again to really understand all the little nuances and philosophical content. Rikabro, you've done an excellent job. Your Rika, her character, her personality, her way of speech ...
- Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2695
Re: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
Well I could call it a parody, but it doesn't seem to fit.Mirage_GSM wrote:That's calling the ocean wet.Also I am aware that some things contradict canon in both works...
Why did you make it a crossover in the first place if you keep nothing but the names?
- Fri Nov 23, 2012 2:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2695
Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
Hey everyone, I've recently started getting into Breaking Bad as well as rediscovering my love for Katawa Shoujo. I love the writing in both pieces of work, so I thought I'd try my hand at combining the two. To me Walter White is a fascinating character, and I'd love to explore the moral dilemmas ...
- Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:48 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Which of the girls would you date in real life?
- Replies: 170
- Views: 61024
Re: Which of the girls would you date in real life?
I'd date Miki in a heartbeat. Energetic, feisty, funny and probably shags like a demon. A definite keeper.
- Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 762639
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/6)
Oh my goodness I was not expecting that. I love the little details you add that really bring out the personality of each character, like Miki's creativity and Suzu's shyness. I like the way you describe her thoughts and emotions as well, it has a very natural feel and flow to it. Suzu really feels ...
- Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
- Replies: 38
- Views: 30191
Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Akira deserves happiness, damn you!
- Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 762639
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)
I love this fic! Always had a thing for Suki, she just looks so cute when she's sleepy. I like how you've portrayed her, your realistic depiction of narcolepsy, the hallucinations with the Grim Reaper are very interesting, and of course, Miki. I love your Miki too.
Please update!
Please update!
- Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:37 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Favorite things about your least favorite girl?
- Replies: 59
- Views: 19282
Re: Favorite things about your least favorite girl?
I like that Shizune's trying to reach out to people and just wants to make more friends, although her brusque manner and her communication problems are putting people off. It makes her feel more like a realistic, well-rounded character. I also like that she eventually makes up with Lilly, family ...
- Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:08 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS
- Replies: 230
- Views: 67079
Re: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS
Every time Lilly mentions Hanako's parents dying in a fire while she was eight, all I could think of was BATMAN. Seriously you guys. Hanako isn't the Joker. She's Batman (or Batwoman). They were both eight when the horrible tragedy struck their lives and now THEIR PARENTS ARE DEAAAAAADDDDD! If I was ...
- Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: M&M: A Tale of Two Delicious Brown Girls
- Replies: 54
- Views: 25500
Re: M&M: A Tale of Two Delicious Brown Girls
I don't usually read girl/girl fics but I love how you've portrayed both girls. I wish there was more Miki fic, she is awesome.
- Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:22 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
- Replies: 77
- Views: 27113
Re: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Crac
Actually that's how I found out about KS. I read the Cracked article, then I went to read the comments and a lot of people were mentioning it. As usual when it comes to any new game or tv show I went over to TVTropes to find out more about it. I was pleasantly surprised to find an extensive, well ...