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by Wetterl
Thu Sep 13, 2012 10:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1587586

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Welp. It's been an eternity since I was on here. I guess what happened was that I went on with life, but now with everything that's been happening recently I think I should give an update, if just to let myself get rid of my thoughts. For anyone who doesn't know of my past, to sum it up; my aunt ...
by Wetterl
Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:15 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1587586

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Wettrl, if you are at the point where you are physically hurting yourself, you really must get some professional help. It's really too dangerous. A cut, especially by something unhygienic as glass can easily get infected, and in the worst case bacteria can get into your bloodstream in which case ...
by Wetterl
Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Energy return running prosthetic like the Cheetah are made of carbon fiber and titanium. Still love the story and anyone that doesn't have a degree in prosthetics probably wouldn't notice this fact so take it for what you will. Did not know that! Although it's too late to change it now unless I ...
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Chapter Eight - Lost Again The days pass and I continue feeling depressed. The runs take a lot off of my mind, though, and I can actually feel how it's getting better. I guess that's what Emi does to people, give them a smile on their face. She's just that kind of person. Lilly hasn't called, but I ...
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1587586

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

No. No, no no. This is not the right thing to do. If you're at this point, I highly, highly recommend you seek professional help. I know it feels like the pain is a release for you but it is extremely unhealthy, and extremely dangerous to do something like this. If you are looking for an emotional ...
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1587586

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Please don't hurt yourself. You don't deserve to be hurt. Please hold on; the storm will pass, and the sun will shine all the brighter. I know that it's bad, but I think that the physical pain blends out the mental one and the physical is easier to handle. Have you tried some form of combat, like ...
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

andros414 wrote:
Wetterl wrote:
random wrote:Are we supposed to empathize with Hisao or is your intention for us to want to punch him where his balls used to be?
A combination of both.
Something along the lines of "Damn, I feel for ya, dude, but man the hell up." perhaps? :wink:
I couldn't put it in better words myself! :)
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

random wrote:Are we supposed to empathize with Hisao or is your intention for us to want to punch him where his balls used to be?
A combination of both.
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:48 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1587586

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

We're all bros here. (Even the female participants in this thread!) We've all come to realize we, in a way, are all here for each other. It's true that none of us know each other at all, to speak honestly. We just have shared our stories. Our stories have shaped us into who we really are on the ...
by Wetterl
Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Elcor wrote:And I swear you are spying on me in some regards.
Oh no! You found out my secret plan!
by Wetterl
Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Sorry that I haven't posted in a few days, but I've had it quite stressful lately, there's been quite a lot going on. Well, I can now say that I am a few chapters ahead if I were to stick by a one chapter per day schedule, which I will try to. Enjoy! Chapter Seven - Thinking of Falling Walking into ...
by Wetterl
Tue May 29, 2012 9:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Can't you people decide what you want? It seems to me that the suggestions have been entirely consistent: Either ALL thoughts are italics or none of it should be (preferably the latter). Doublespace between paragraphs. Start a new paragraph when changing speakers. Use proper spelling, punctuation ...
by Wetterl
Tue May 29, 2012 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

This story is so damned frustrating, and I don't mean just the content. Stop it with the italics already and doublespace your paragraphs... making the story physically harder to read is a bad plan. Can't you people decide what you want? First I'm told to doublespace my paragraphs, then I'm told not ...
by Wetterl
Tue May 29, 2012 12:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

All comments regarding Lilly's letter: I agree. Lilly's a total bitch. Chapter Six - The Runner I wake up with a start. Lying down, it takes a few moments for me to remember the events of the time before I fell asleep. I check the time to see that I have slept for nearly fifteen hours. I guess a few ...
by Wetterl
Mon May 28, 2012 5:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 19704

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Chapter Five- Across the World I wave Emi off as we depart to our dorms. Somehow she's been able to hold back her energy until now and she sprints faster on those legs than most would with regular. Walking back to the boy's dorms I realise that I've spent quite a long time hanging with Emi; the sun ...