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For me, it's hanako scene at showing her scar and her explanations , and other one is Lilly's visit to hisao after his collapse on his way to reach her before departure.

This game make me, the pathetic man ever, regret mocking life.....

Good to see nice writing but would you kindly fix the paragraph issues ?

Chapter 2 : REALITY “GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH !” The boy, Hisao Nakai, awaken from his sleep and also from his nightmare. He found himself sweated and thirsty. His quarter, shared with his step-father, Professor Mutou, is only a small room, with a bed, table, lamp, and chair. His room wall is covered by old ...

here's the chapter 1 and 2. I also make some sketch but one day, i will post on this thread. Check this out. Chapter 1 : DREAM Somehow....... I feel something.... That is comfort me..... Where am i........ It cannot be. Somehow, i stranded on freshly green field of grass. What i see is flowers ...

Well, first off, the grammar issues are going to be an enormous hurdle for any readers. You could be writing an incredible masterpiece, but if it reads like a YouTube comment, no one is going to give it any respect (or attention). I understand if English isn't your first language, but you'll either ...

Enemy | wrote:I was gonna comment on the grammar but I just imagined a thick Russian accent like in the actual Metro 2033 and it seemed like it was on purpose

yeah, still work on grammar, and i imagined hisao use......thick russian accent (on japanese ofc). Maybe it will be epic

Ok, here's some fiction about this vn, don't know if this worth. So, just give some comment and critic, and lemme know. Prelude : My name is Hisao Nakai, today, i am turned into 20. Like folks on Japan, i also live on underground train station tunnel. My homeplace. The underground train station ...

reading this, remind me back to Forrest Gump. Glad to see precious writing again on this fan section.

Short, but so touching and emotional.
Wonder if Hisao still alive when their daughter write her name on the tree ? Sorry, curiousity can't be helped

another good-writing story of Hanako story keep it up. I can't wait for next chapter

Translation not yet finished, man. Around 80% done now, if I remember right. Yes, that's about it. http://vntls.tindabox.net/project/irotoridori-no-sekai Should be done by the end of the year, at least. I too am waiting for that. The artwork in it is gorgeous. I've been in love with FAVORITE's ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:So Lilly wears her bra to bed?

seems legit anyway, thats, ummmmm, errrr, nice love dowey story i think. I mean, when i read that...... nah don't know how to say. Maybe you expressing everything so good and almost like real. Seriously. keep it up

someone have irotoridori no sekai english patch ? just got this vn today from friend >.<

guys, i have play narcissu. Man it's prologue is like KS one >.< Thanks for recommend this

You mean understand Japanese, right? Anyway, Eternal Heart is the easiest VN that I've read untranslated. (Using mouseover dictionary via TA with MeCab+JParser, of course.) (Hoshimemo is also probably the same, but I read that translated, so can't say for sure.) Short sentences with very basic ...