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Well, I've spent a good chunk of time researching where I want to go with this. I'm going to use general Japanese locations and landmarks, etc., but I'm not going to get into super-specific stuff. That is beyond my scope, as someone who has never visited Japan and probably never will. Working on the...

I don't mean to be rude, but I've read this before. Here , in fact. And as far as I know, All-Maker isn't intending to do a rewrite of Shizune's route, one by the name of "A Deft Touch" was/is underway by Ghostwriter. So if you're not All-Maker or Ghostwriter, then perhaps there's some ex...

You're thinking of Click, a movie I actually haven't seen before. There was no real inspiration for this; I was quite literally chilling on a couch, being an asocial nerd, and it just came to me. KS is very strange when taken literally; you never see Iwanako's face, Hisao's parents, or the Doctor. Y...

Well, what can I say here? This idea came to me very suddenly yesterday. Maybe it's just me, but I imagined what KS would be like if interpreted as literally as possible; the idea that we, the readers, are a god-like figure in our own instances of the game, following a script. We can fast-forward, r...

I don't really have a headcanon voice for Mutou just yet, but I'm working on it.

Anyways, updated the prologue slightly from the original Pastebin because I completely forgot about something, even after proofreading half a dozen times. Way to go, self.

Next chapter should be a fairly long piece.

*steps up quietly, a waif-like lilt in my voice as I settle my face into an expression of hopelessness* "Please, sir, may I have some more?" --- Okay, Oliver has a point. I like this. I like the very idea of this - a continuation of the tale post The Deep End following the effect it had o...

This is going to be my first long-running fic (that isn't a total failure, hopefully). I was in Crispychat one night, and either I, or someone else was throwing out random ideas... a story involving Mutou and noir elements caught my imagination. Nobody else seemed to be stepping up to the plate to d...

The narrative's cool, but you're writing the dialogue as if we're watching the scene unfold on the big screen. Well, we're not; we're reading their story, on a page. The spice does not flow that way.

I am dunecat.

This is exactly why I felt terrible playing Lilly's route right after Hanako's.

Delicious Jigoro.

I humbly await further entries, my good sir.

This piques my interest.

Carry on, good sir. I'd love to see where this is headed.

Very good writing here. There are a couple of spelling/grammatical errors throughout, but otherwise very nice. I can tell by the title and your username that you are a big David Lynch fan. The Lynchian influence is very present in the surreal settings, especially the hilltop scene (with the inexpli...

I figure enough people have had a chance to read this by now, but here's my inspiration for the story: Hisao is me, though with key details changed: * I was in the hospital for kidney rejection, not a heart attack. * The girl on the hill was my most recent ex-girlfriend. She burned. * The man in the...

Just in case I have to post something more than an image macro, that's was glorious.

That was... well, horrifying, but very well written! Since you're so new to fanfiction, you seem like you've been writing original works, at least off and on, for a few years now. I liked it, even if it was a little too macabre for my tastes. Before this most recent stuff, I hadn't written anything...