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Brilliant. I could watch Rin kick Hanako in her burnt face all day long.

I read chrono's full posting of his Katawa Superpowers story on the fan fiction forum and I have to say I had some fun reading it. It's fast paced and reads a bit like you're watching a TV series. Not for everyone I guess.

As for this reading, the voices are irritating rather than funny.

I'm pretty sure this violates the creative commons licence that Katawa Shoujo has. Mainly because you've used sprites from the game and the logo of the game. I don't think calling it "Katawa Shoujo" in any way would help your case either.

I noticed you spelled dessert as 'desert' more than once in a short space of time in the latest update. I'm not one to criticise people's spelling, but thought you might find it helpful. I thought that Kenji was going to make up with Suzu and Hisao by giving her all the books he stole from the ...

I think Rin is fine. But why does Hisao have an artificial inner ear? I was thinking that if someone had an artificial heart, then the surgeons would also develop a way of letting the patient know if their organ is malfunctioning. So I imagined maybe they'd put an implant in their ear or something.

“The senate?” asked Hisao, bringing up their ETA to the senate’s star system on his data-pad. “I thought we were trying to get to the Separatists as fast as possible, to keep their fleet numbers at a minimum.” “We know, we know~” the Executor, taking on a faux-exhausted expression, “But one of the si ...

I noticed you spelled dessert as 'desert' more than once in a short space of time in the latest update. I'm not one to criticise people's spelling, but thought you might find it helpful. I thought that Kenji was going to make up with Suzu and Hisao by giving her all the books he stole from the ...

Sorry, had to revive this thread for a thought I had the other day. Maybe me and snow storm are BOTH right. What I'm saying is, there needs to be a Misha/Kenji route. I'm not saying pair them up, but I'm saying there needs to be a route where Hisao dates (or becomes good friends depending on the ...

The room was in revered silence. Each captain seemed to be either content with or silently criticising the plan, most likely determining how much danger their own ships would be in. Hisao was almost ready to declare a vote for approval of the plan before Rin spoke up. “What if the other captains see ...

Joke suggestions: Misha: Can you eat interesting things? or Can your drills pierce the heavens? Kenji: Can you look before you leap from a roof ? Miki: Can you handle the truth? (I actually quite like this one) Suzu: Can you stay awake for 5 goddamn minutes!? Srsbsns: Misha: Can you forgive the past ...

I like it. A part of me hopes it will be a Yuri storyline.

I don't have any literary criticisms to contribute unfortunately. I do however look forward to the next instalment.

<poetry> Five, seven, then five Syllables make a haiku. Remarkable oaf. Note: No ill will intended by the above; merely advice in the form of a quote. Cookie for the reference. Moving on... Surrounded by snow, My love warms my heart, but fate Snatches him away. Rejected and hurt, I follow her in ...

A great little one-shot. I enjoyed reading it.

Part 3 of the epic tale that has almost no relation to the original fiction from which the characters are based. Does Hisao still even have a heart condition? Can Hanako exist without Lilly? How many more popular science fiction plot devices will our writer steal from real authors? Keep reading ...

This was a fun read. Always a pleasure, Scissorlips.

I fear for how Yuuko handled the blackout.