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Meadows wrote:

• Mutou has a thug-like brother that randomly shows up
• He knows Saki
• Saki is not happy to see him

You best not be going where I think you're going with this... ala 'Watch, or Don't Watch'

You should read 'Bowl of Noodles'.
And we don't talk about that fic.

Part Three The bell chimes through the school's halls announcing that the lunch hour has begun. I can't believe I spent almost the entire morning hiding! I'm ashamed I left class like that, but I don't know what else I could have done. I leave the bathroom and find myself torn between hurrying to m...

God, I love Saki! She would be the best route if she were in the game. I love this thing so much, Saki is a delightful bitch. I can't wait to see where it goes.

Mirage_GSM wrote:There's a semi-canon fanfiction by... I think it was by cpl_crud... Featuring her in the secret santa two years ago. So not really inner workings of the VN
I used her personality from that story in Katawa Kijo.

The rooftop star gazing story? I'll have to reread that, then.

[Nemz] This is supposed to take place near the end of Lilly's route, so it happens after their date when Hisao talks about the letter. I guess that may ruin a little of the drama, since you know he's on the way to a Good End... [Mirage_GSM] It was a little draggy, but I felt the need to get it clear...

Part Two Hisao checks the halls first before we leave and the two of us hastily exit the boy's dormitories. Despite our general lateness this morning, it wouldn't do for us to be caught in such a situation and I don't want any sort of close call like what happened in the shower. One embarrassment i...

Thank you all for the comments so far. I hope my added introduction answers some questions. Yes, there are multiple parts and I had noticed there were no Lilly POV fics from what I had seen. I wanted to have a little bit of a glimpse into Lilly as a child, show the type of environment she was raised...

I had this sitting in a document for some time gathering dust, practically forgotten, until I read Paddy's "A Memory Hisao has of Lilly" http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6664 which reminded me of this opening part. So I went back and finished it and here it is for your enjoyment...

Touching story, BUT: What mistake has Hanako made? The cheating? You mean the cheating that was entirely intentional and not an accident? And I laughed hard that she said she wasn't going to tell Hisao until she was raped. I guess Tenshi really is a dark knight after all? He punished Hanako's unfai...

All this discussion about Lilly's family is really interesting and brings up a lot of good seeds for future writing. I for one will be filing this away for use later. As for the second part, I really enjoyed it. I really like the memoir perspective, Hisao telling stories about he and his wife down t...

I know exactly what you're saying. While I couldn't relate, Shizune's route does seem to have the 'high school relationship' down pat, like Emi's route does as well. I simply preferred the way Emi's route went about it. I have to say, I would have liked Hisao and Shizune to at least go out on a date...

Daitengu wrote:Game wise I would just assume that Lily was put in a Catholic private school as a way to keep her out of the public eye, as it was the closest to her father's beliefs.

Isn't it her Mother who is Scottish and thus implied to be the religious one?

I may write more. Now, I have no intention of making her a raging evangelical Christian. Nor holier-than-thou. But I could see her as being a nominal or lukewarm Presbyterian. (She might have been taught to be a Christian as a child - Scotland once was a Christian country, after all.) I could take ...

Shizune Bad: As Written Shizune Neutral: As Good End, but less of a positive spin. The three friends vow to stay close, but Hisao has his doubts about it, noting that it is unlikely the three of them, going their own paths of life, will ever see each other again. Shizune Good: Shizune and Hisao deci...

That was lovely, Paddy. I always imagined Lilly having a very quite faith, not wanting to offend others with her beliefs, but very sure of God's love. A beautiful scene with a lovely song to play along with it. Listening to the song made me a little misty eyed, even. Those words, coming from Lilly, ...