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by Shadow1111
Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)

I see why you did what you did, I surprisingly understood what you mean by this "other world" kind of feeling. Very creative way of doing a real epilogue. Good job.
by Shadow1111
Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)

Just registered for the forums (Eruta) . Just thought I would respond saying that the epilogue was very well written and executed (except for the age difference between Hisao and Hanako but you fixed that) the scene where Hanako said that Hiaso died it seemed to hit hard, i thought it would just be ...
by Shadow1111
Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)

I didn't read the epilogue until just now...what was...I...uh...I cried...a lot...but I don't...I love it but...you know.
by Shadow1111
Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)

Glad your glad I'm glad...uh yeah. Anyways checked out the game your making, seems pretty cool, cant wait to see how it turns out. I would offer my help but I'm only good at getting ideas not putting them to work, and crying to some-what emotional things...such as this was. Anyways cant wait to see ...
by Shadow1111
Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12 up)

Elcor wrote:Just awesome...can't wait for the epilogue.
I hope that you do continue to re-visit Hisao and Hanako whenever you find the time.

Shadow1111, if he did that for the other girls, it would no doubt be well written stories.
Definitely. I've read a few fan fics but this was of a new quality.
by Shadow1111
Tue Apr 24, 2012 1:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12 up)

Happy to hear you want to make a epilogue. I wish luck to you and leave with a question. By "more stories that continue or take place after this one" do you mean continuing a Hanako and Hiaso thing or changing who its about but in the same world as this is etc... But either way I loved thi...
by Shadow1111
Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12 up)

Epilogue would be nice but you cant force it. I enjoyed this one and is definitely my favorite. Sad to see it end but really liked it, plan on doing another one some time in the future?
by Shadow1111
Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45172

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 10 up)

Just to be sure, this is the ending right?