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- Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
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Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
Suzu impatiently taps her fingers against the table impatiently while Lelouch goes over his character stats. Only needs one "Impatiently". Which doesn't matter, just one though. As for clubs, those happen directly after class. So Aaron chilling in his room would be quite odd unless he ski...
- Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
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Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
In actuality, they keep throwing curveballs my way in the form of words that I’m fairly certain no one has used since the colonists landed in California and fought off the Germans to reclaim Alaska. LOL SO RANDUM XDDDD If that means spending a couple nights a week pretending I know anything about e...
- Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
I KNO RITE XXXXDDDDMealforthree wrote:LOL SO RANDUM XDDDDIn actuality, they keep throwing curveballs my way in the form of words that I’m fairly certain no one has used since the colonists landed in California and fought off the Germans to reclaim Alaska.
- Tue Apr 17, 2012 8:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
O hai forums Alrighty, this one's...long. Well, longer than my last ones. I apologize in advance for any wierdness or just plan what the fuck-ery. As always, comments are VERY appreciated, so give me your input :) Chapter 3: Creatures of the Night After the rather eventful day at the mall, I almost ...
- Mon Apr 16, 2012 7:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 45600
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 2 up)
U NASTRY TRORRUStanrey Cook wrote:YOU DARE INSULT GRORIOUS MODERATERU OF FOR REEF STOODIO FORUM?Mealforthree wrote: THIS IS RINE
__________________(END OF RINE)
YOU <---(WHERE YOU R STANDU)
YOU HAB CROSSU THE RINE
DING DONG BANNU
YOU BETTAH BEREEV DAT'S A BANNU
RINE ENDS HERE
- Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
Just another little forum related tip to clean up the little contents section you have going and make it nicer to read. when you use the url tags, you can also do it like NAME HERE For example in your first section to link to chapter two it would look like [url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52...
- Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 45600
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 6 up)
Mirage_GSM, that's all very good advice. I guess he problem is that I'm not very patient. When I have a story in my mind, I want to write it out as quickly as I can. It's because for me a story flows out of my fingers almost organically. Many things have happened in this story, that I hadn't planne...
- Mon Apr 16, 2012 2:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 45600
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 5 up)
The dialogue seems a bit...awkward? I kinda felt like I was watching an anime sub, hehe.
Good concept though, keep at it
Good concept though, keep at it
- Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
I'm enjoying the story. Nice to see more minor characters in the spotlight. though I suppose you shouldn’t judge a book by it’s cover. Aaaaaand here's a grammar lesson. Don't worry, this is one of the simplest to remember. its = possessive it's = it is There are no exceptions. gaaah,how'd I miss th...
- Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
- Replies: 54
- Views: 22542
Re: The Collector
BlackRockHanako wrote: ‘I collect them. Their souls. I trap them in paintings.’ She tells me this as if she’s describing her lunch to me, her tone devoid of emotion.
‘But I already have someone blind.’ She repeats her earlier lamentation. ‘So I’ll just have to kill you. Sorry.’
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
Decent start so far. I'll keep an eye on this one. btw: “But you, on the other hand! You’re perfect! I can see it in her eyes! She wants you to throw her on her bed and take her maidenhood her, you stud! You two are perfect for eachother” should probably be “But you on the other hand, you’re perfec...
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
I am enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Keep it up! ZOMG Doomish commented on my story asdhasmhioacn!!1! *head explodes* I kid, I kid. Thanks for the support though Doom, I'm liking your Mutou story :D While I'm at it though, how do you link to different chapters? Click on the subject line...
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
ZOMG Doomish commented on my story asdhasmhioacn!!1! *head explodes*Doomish wrote:I am enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Keep it up!
I kid, I kid. Thanks for the support though Doom, I'm liking your Mutou story
While I'm at it though, how do you link to different chapters?
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
Yay, another chapter, sweet! Suzu is so damn adorable! Right, now I have to let my perfectionist out.. so if she happens to fall asleep on you, it probably doesnt me[an] anything. Also, 'because I know shit all of where I'm going.' Am I reading this wrong, or did you mess it up? I looked up "s...
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 81854
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
New chapter be all up in yo grill. Forgive me for any Street fighter mistakes, by the way. Comments and critiques are greatly appreciated! *hint hint* Chapter 2: War Dance The next few hours consist largely of playing catch up on my school subjects. Just as Ms.Tanaka said, the pace is noticeable mor...