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by DanjaDoom
Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up

Suzu impatiently taps her fingers against the table impatiently while Lelouch goes over his character stats. Only needs one "Impatiently". Which doesn't matter, just one though. As for clubs, those happen directly after class. So Aaron chilling in his room would be quite odd unless he ski...
by DanjaDoom
Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up

In actuality, they keep throwing curveballs my way in the form of words that I’m fairly certain no one has used since the colonists landed in California and fought off the Germans to reclaim Alaska. LOL SO RANDUM XDDDD If that means spending a couple nights a week pretending I know anything about e...
by DanjaDoom
Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up

Mealforthree wrote:
In actuality, they keep throwing curveballs my way in the form of words that I’m fairly certain no one has used since the colonists landed in California and fought off the Germans to reclaim Alaska.
LOL SO RANDUM XDDDD
I KNO RITE XXXXDDDD
by DanjaDoom
Tue Apr 17, 2012 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

O hai forums Alrighty, this one's...long. Well, longer than my last ones. I apologize in advance for any wierdness or just plan what the fuck-ery. As always, comments are VERY appreciated, so give me your input :) Chapter 3: Creatures of the Night After the rather eventful day at the mall, I almost ...
by DanjaDoom
Mon Apr 16, 2012 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45388

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 2 up)

Stanrey Cook wrote:
Mealforthree wrote: THIS IS RINE

__________________(END OF RINE)

YOU <---(WHERE YOU R STANDU)

YOU HAB CROSSU THE RINE

DING DONG BANNU
YOU DARE INSULT GRORIOUS MODERATERU OF FOR REEF STOODIO FORUM?
YOU BETTAH BEREEV DAT'S A BANNU
RINE ENDS HERE
U NASTRY TRORRU
by DanjaDoom
Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

Just another little forum related tip to clean up the little contents section you have going and make it nicer to read. when you use the url tags, you can also do it like NAME HERE For example in your first section to link to chapter two it would look like [url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52...
by DanjaDoom
Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45388

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 6 up)

Mirage_GSM, that's all very good advice. I guess he problem is that I'm not very patient. When I have a story in my mind, I want to write it out as quickly as I can. It's because for me a story flows out of my fingers almost organically. Many things have happened in this story, that I hadn't planne...
by DanjaDoom
Mon Apr 16, 2012 2:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
Replies: 124
Views: 45388

Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 5 up)

The dialogue seems a bit...awkward? I kinda felt like I was watching an anime sub, hehe.

Good concept though, keep at it :)
by DanjaDoom
Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

I'm enjoying the story. Nice to see more minor characters in the spotlight. though I suppose you shouldn’t judge a book by it’s cover. Aaaaaand here's a grammar lesson. Don't worry, this is one of the simplest to remember. its = possessive it's = it is There are no exceptions. gaaah,how'd I miss th...
by DanjaDoom
Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 22422

Re: The Collector

BlackRockHanako wrote: ‘I collect them. Their souls. I trap them in paintings.’ She tells me this as if she’s describing her lunch to me, her tone devoid of emotion.
‘But I already have someone blind.’ She repeats her earlier lamentation. ‘So I’ll just have to kill you. Sorry.’
by DanjaDoom
Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

Decent start so far. I'll keep an eye on this one. btw: “But you, on the other hand! You’re perfect! I can see it in her eyes! She wants you to throw her on her bed and take her maidenhood her, you stud! You two are perfect for eachother” should probably be “But you on the other hand, you’re perfec...
by DanjaDoom
Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

I am enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Keep it up! ZOMG Doomish commented on my story asdhasmhioacn!!1! *head explodes* I kid, I kid. Thanks for the support though Doom, I'm liking your Mutou story :D While I'm at it though, how do you link to different chapters? Click on the subject line...
by DanjaDoom
Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

Doomish wrote:I am enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Keep it up!
ZOMG Doomish commented on my story asdhasmhioacn!!1! *head explodes*

I kid, I kid. Thanks for the support though Doom, I'm liking your Mutou story :D

While I'm at it though, how do you link to different chapters?
by DanjaDoom
Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

Yay, another chapter, sweet! Suzu is so damn adorable! Right, now I have to let my perfectionist out.. so if she happens to fall asleep on you, it probably doesnt me[an] anything. Also, 'because I know shit all of where I'm going.' Am I reading this wrong, or did you mess it up? I looked up "s...
by DanjaDoom
Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 81624

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)

New chapter be all up in yo grill. Forgive me for any Street fighter mistakes, by the way. Comments and critiques are greatly appreciated! *hint hint* Chapter 2: War Dance The next few hours consist largely of playing catch up on my school subjects. Just as Ms.Tanaka said, the pace is noticeable mor...