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NOT AN UPDATE Alright, sorry that it's not an update. Just wanted to make sure that I'm still alive and people don't think that I straight up like, quit. I got some splainin' to do, though. So, I took a break, kinda. I saved Rin for last because I was afraid. I never actually finished her route, so...

It seems like the drama and conversations in this last part don't necessarily match up with the preceding events. I mean, Hisao could have just as easily said "No, Emi, you're wrong, because I do actually care, I was just a retard and lost my ration of meds for the weekend, not trying to kill ...

Nice story,though the pacing seems a little weird to me. Well, I guess it IS a "very short" story, heh. It looks like the Holy Trinity of Suzu writers has been completed! :lol: I sincerely hope you're not thinking I'm one of them. My writing is sophomoric at best, and like I explained - I...

Nice story,though the pacing seems a little weird to me. Well, I guess it IS a "very short" story, heh.

It looks like the Holy Trinity of Suzu writers has been completed!

Fuck's sake Doom, stop being so glorious, you're making us look like plebes in comparison.

I'm the exact same way, lol. I'll start thinking about which direction I want my story to go in, come up blank, and just wing it. I actually started work on my next chapter tonight :) And as a side note, I kinda use your story as a launch pad whenever I want to get writing. I take a look at it, yel...

Curse you Scissorlips for being a better Suzu writer!(I kid, I kid) D: Lots of writers will espouse the benefits of having a well drawn out plan for your story. That's really too much effort for me so I kind of just keep going and pray that I don't run out of ideas to help me get to each major plot...

Delicious, indeed. Your depiction of Miki is... interesting. Molly Kapur is the front left corner girl without legs, right? I can't remember where I saved the class 3-3 roster image, and can't find the original post either. :/ I think it's cool to have a nice Miki out there as opposed to the total ...

Holy shit it's late, why am I up? Anyway, here's that Miki and molly side story I was talking about. Expect some good ol' fashioned UST and whatnot. I plan on writing a few more entries to this, but I'm not sure how many exactly. On a side note, I gotta say I'm at a slump with my other story, "...

Yay, another Doomish stor-

*reads*

D:

nemz wrote:...both?

I suppose I could work both in...hmm

Again, sorry for the double post, but I figured this would be the best place to ask...lol

Very enjoyable read. By the way you have the same simile twice fairly quickly. It's the one about brushing your teeth and drinking orange juice. It doesn't detract from the story, it just reads weirdly in my opinion. Gah, my bad. I decided to switch up where the simile was in the story, guess I for...

bronko wrote:
@katawabloke
Vekter is right though. Reading some fanfics here will get you an idea of how you can do it.

Quick everyone, now's the time to plug your stories!

I kid, I kid.

Sorry for the double post here, but I just want some opinions. I'm writing a Miki and Molly side story that probably won't be canon with this one. Question is, would you guys rather see a "friendship" version or an "explicit" version? Feedback for that idea and this story is appr...