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Sooo, either you're all stunned into silence over how good this story was, or perhaps my writing skills are getting a bit rusty? Well, anyway, I'm writing the next Hideaki chapter, thought you all might like to know.

Don't call it a comeback. Well, I guess you could, since I've come back and all. Anyway, enjoy these feels, on the house. Tale Five: The greying man grips tightly at his turquoise bracelet, worry besetting the features of his rugged face. He feels helpless among the sea of frantic doctors moving fro...

*Hisao

Otherwise, good job

Kitsune Spirit wrote: “This is the food, you…?” I ask Molly who is already digging into a small container of green tea ice cream.

“Yup!” Miki exclaims with a megawatt grin. “I’ve got a whole fridge full of it, so feel free to come over anytime you want and help me eat it!”

This seems wonderfully familiar

So this was the Molly fic you had germinating, huh? Very, very nice.

Well, that settles it, I'm gonna get to work on some more mocha goodness. Feels good to be an inspiration.

Hate to be criticising on the details so much again, but I guess being detail-oriented is kinda my shtick... Molly is missing both her legs above the knee. It seems a little off-putting to have her roll out of bed and get dressed with nary a mention of the prosthetics. Characterization still seems ...

On the subject of tertiaries and their fanfic screen time, Taro is actually quite popular. From my trawling, the least used characters seem to be Akio Hayashi (often mentioned, rarely given a significant role), Ritsu Tainaka (retcameo, but technically an OC), Misaki Kawana (I'm not sure I've EVER s...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Fun story so far. I really like your versions of both Taro and Miki.

Appreciate it, Mirage

No witty dialogue this time. Just slide your feedback under the door and go away. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Cowabunga! It’s time to wake up and get some pizza, dude!” In hindsight, buying that Mikey alarm clock off of Amazon may not have been the brightest idea. There’s only so much painful eighties slang I ca...

Instead of going to war with Banda, why not team up and produce a mocha-yuri story of mind-blowing, epic proportions? :3 +1 Then I can make that Sex and the City 2 work with 'em. 'Cept to do that, I'd have to watch the movie first... Oh, and to say something about the actual fic: good job. I am far...

Hoitash wrote:you might need to co-god with Banda, actually

Looks like it's time for some Holy Warrin'

Hoitash wrote:

DanjaDoom wrote:Because if no one was going to write brown girl fap-fuel, then by God I'm gonna carry that weight.

You do Holy Work, truly

God of fap-fuel bless you brother

Dr. Robotnik wrote:I didn't even think of Big Bob when I imagined his voice, but the voice I had for him is pretty much exactly that.

It just fits too well. Both are muscular, boisterous businessmen who also happen to be shitty parents.

This is a work of genious. I kept hearing Hideaki talking in a monotone, uninterested voice, the perfect foil to his blowhard dad's BSing. For the record, the only voice I hear when writing Jigoro is Big Bob Pattaki from Hey Arnold. And Hideaki, is... hmm. I guess teenage Leonardo DiCaprio. For the...

Sorry if that offends, I know some forums get really touchy about necro-posts. It seems silly to me though, to make a whole new thread about another thread (and then get yelled at for not using the search), when I could just go post in that thread in the first place! O.o I hope you do more with Mik...