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- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 80744
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
Haha, okay. Just wanted to make sure. The sentence makes a whole lot more sence now.
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 80744
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story)
Yay, another chapter, sweet! Suzu is so damn adorable!
Right, now I have to let my perfectionist out..
Right, now I have to let my perfectionist out..
Also, 'because I know shit all of where I'm going.' Am I reading this wrong, or did you mess it up?so if she happens to fall asleep on you, it probably doesnt me[an] anything.
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 5:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Superpowers (Spoilers)(Marvel crossover) Final
- Replies: 72
- Views: 38649
Re: Katawa Superpowers (Spoilers)(Marvel crossover) Chapter
A second chapter already? Has this already been written, or are you an extremely fast writer?
Alright, now on to your grammer, you seem to have mixed up some homophones, for example,
Also, making Hanako bacon? WAHAHAHA!
Alright, now on to your grammer, you seem to have mixed up some homophones, for example,
And theres a few full stops missing.The others shook there [their] heads
Also, making Hanako bacon? WAHAHAHA!
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
- Replies: 54
- Views: 22109
Re: The Collector
Oh, wow. Great as always, BlackRockHanako.
I'd write some more, but it's 5 in the morning here, and insomnia combined with the mental image of a Knife/Paintbrush in Rin's eye have left me slightly speechless.
I'd write some more, but it's 5 in the morning here, and insomnia combined with the mental image of a Knife/Paintbrush in Rin's eye have left me slightly speechless.
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Superpowers (Spoilers)(Marvel crossover) Final
- Replies: 72
- Views: 38649
Re: Katawa Superpowers (Spoilers) (Long) (Marvel crossover)
Heh. Rin reminds me a little of Mordin from ME2 in this story. Its good, I dont know about the Marvel crossover yet, we'll just have to see how it ends up. Grammer wise, there needs to be full stops after the narration that comes after speaking parts. You seem to have missed quite a few. And thats a...
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Invitation (A general epilogue)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4990
Re: Invitation (A general epilogue)
This seems like its going to end up as a great story, hope to see more soon.
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Feminist Republic of Russia
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3172
Re: The Feminist Republic of Russia
This story.. Oh wow. I think Kenji sums it up for me.
Kenji wrote:That was badsss.
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 8:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Running Interference (Haganai/KS Xover) *Discontinued
- Replies: 96
- Views: 49987
Re: Running Interference (Xover Route) Updated 4/13/12
Great work as always, keep it up!
- Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735897
Re: Who Loves Me? (Suzu)
That was pretty awesome. I hope that its not just a one-shot and that you keep on writing this.
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Ikkou [Corpse Party Crossover] *RIP* - Is dead
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6424
Re: Katawa Ikkou [Crossover]
Sorry for the double post, I'm leaving in a few minutes, but my draft has been cleaned up nicely and I'm fine with what I've written, so I've decided to just go ahead and post it. Opening Act: Chapter 2 ___________________ I’m still confused on just what is going on. Everyone was called here with no...
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Yankee (Updated 5/7/12)
- Replies: 31
- Views: 12262
Re: Katawa Yankee
Sweet, a new chapter! I really like this story, and a bad-ass Hisao is pretty awesome too. Lol'd pretty hard at Hisao going 'Ivegottagodosomething!'. Hope to see more!
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Ikkou [Corpse Party Crossover] *RIP* - Is dead
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6424
Re: Katawa Ikkou [Crossover]
It looks like the writing is alright, but I've had enough of these types of stories lately, I might come back this in the future though. Which part did you dislike? The horror/gore aspect? The crossover part? If you could be a little more specific, it would help me improve my writing. Ah well, not ...
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Ikkou [Corpse Party Crossover] *RIP* - Is dead
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6424
Re: Katawa Ikkou [Crossover]
I'm not quite sure how this is going to work with KS. Shizune is not the type to go on a rampage and kill of other students. Also, you might want to think of a reason why Shizune would invite exactly those people for whatever she planned - and I mean a reason other than "they are the main char...
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 7:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Ikkou [Corpse Party Crossover] *RIP* - Is dead
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6424
Katawa Ikkou [Corpse Party Crossover] *RIP* - Is dead
Hello Katawa Shoujo Forums! This is my first time posting a story anywhere on the internet, so constructive criticism would be gladly appreciated! Just before you start reading, there are a few things that I should clear up. Firstly, the name would roughly translate into 'Disability Party', which is...
- Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Doctor Mut-Who
- Replies: 43
- Views: 17795
Re: Doctor Mut-Who
Well, if you look at the first post, the credits part to be specific,Triscuitable wrote: And why are we assuming Mutou is Ten? He could very well be Five or Seven.
Or, the Tenth Doctor.Mut-Who wrote: Starring:
David Tennant