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First I got Shizune just by not being a total dick to the nice girls who were helping me get settled in. Then I did the exact opposite on every choice I was presented and ended up with that troublemaker Emi. With a more thoughtful effort I then went through Hanako and Lilly's routes, intentionally s...

I don't know if I'd go quite that far (writing quality is subjective afterall, and that Muto scene still bothers me a little), but it's definately one of the best Rin fics around.

I think this is the second or third story I've read from "the beforetimes, the long long ago" that featured lesbian Shizune and straight Misha. Amusing.

Yup, sounds about right.

I'm really enjoying this. The way you keep finding ways to talk about problems by talking about something completely unrelated is quite well done. Mirage is right, however... this particular call out of the blue, while entertaining, makes no sense for several reasons. Not the least of which is that ...

Honestly, it comes off as Hanako having a puppy love crush on Hisao and being devastated out of proportion. And it says that Hanako told Lilly she liked Hisao. When did this take place? During the two or three weeks all three of them were together before Lilly left for Scotland the first time? Lill...

Uh... do you not understand the term? Without suspension of disbelief fiction stops working, the reader constantly aware of reading and not getting caught up in the tale being told.

But Lilly is not the type of person to do this. I think it's entirely possible, actually. Clearly they both like him, and despite Lilly's facade of perfection we should all know damn well she's quite flawed indeed. She wouldn't intentionally hurt Hanako, no, but it seemed more like she got caught u...

Oh I didn't mean it in a bad way at all. It's well written, I'm just not sure where this could possibly be going. At the moment it's just sort of vaguelly bittersweet, I guess? I just don't know yet.

Well, that was different. Not sure what to make of this yet in all honesty.

I just assumed she was so caught up in herself that she just didn't talk about it and imagined this place was nothing short of a circus sideshow, in fact that that was what it's claim to fame was, with dehumanization of the staff as expected par for the course. If that's not the case though I don't ...

ah, so he did. oh well.

"Indeed. It's a shame to be going back so soon, but we'll still have our memories of this place." WOW. Looking back at that line (I had to boot up the game again just to insure it really was there) after knowing the full scope of things involved gives it a very different reading. Even in ...

Well the way things were going, I'd say the breakup was completely inevitable. My guess is that the breakup should be the end of act 2. Act 3 would be about either giving up on her (neutral end) or deciding to start dating the REAL Saki, which would lead to act 4 and either a good or bad end. This H...

I agree something doesn't add up, but every time I try and put the pieces together they still don't fit. My original stupid thought was that Lilly was somehow behind all this, but getting Hanako to a specific bar that she's never visited before is just too coincidental for her (or anyone, really) to...