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by nemz
Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What arc should i try next?
Replies: 985
Views: 261562

Re: Dissussion about the order in which you play the routes.

First I got Shizune just by not being a total dick to the nice girls who were helping me get settled in. Then I did the exact opposite on every choice I was presented and ended up with that troublemaker Emi. With a more thoughtful effort I then went through Hanako and Lilly's routes, intentionally s...
by nemz
Wed Jan 16, 2013 6:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97641

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

I don't know if I'd go quite that far (writing quality is subjective afterall, and that Muto scene still bothers me a little), but it's definately one of the best Rin fics around.
by nemz
Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness
Replies: 40
Views: 21790

Re: Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness

I think this is the second or third story I've read from "the beforetimes, the long long ago" that featured lesbian Shizune and straight Misha. Amusing.
by nemz
Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 12318

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

Yup, sounds about right.
by nemz
Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97641

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

I'm really enjoying this. The way you keep finding ways to talk about problems by talking about something completely unrelated is quite well done. Mirage is right, however... this particular call out of the blue, while entertaining, makes no sense for several reasons. Not the least of which is that ...
by nemz
Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 22906

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Honestly, it comes off as Hanako having a puppy love crush on Hisao and being devastated out of proportion. And it says that Hanako told Lilly she liked Hisao. When did this take place? During the two or three weeks all three of them were together before Lilly left for Scotland the first time? Lill...
by nemz
Thu Jan 10, 2013 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43659

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Uh... do you not understand the term? Without suspension of disbelief fiction stops working, the reader constantly aware of reading and not getting caught up in the tale being told.
by nemz
Wed Jan 09, 2013 7:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 22906

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

But Lilly is not the type of person to do this. I think it's entirely possible, actually. Clearly they both like him, and despite Lilly's facade of perfection we should all know damn well she's quite flawed indeed. She wouldn't intentionally hurt Hanako, no, but it seemed more like she got caught u...
by nemz
Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deconstruction
Replies: 4
Views: 3694

Re: Deconstruction

Oh I didn't mean it in a bad way at all. It's well written, I'm just not sure where this could possibly be going. At the moment it's just sort of vaguelly bittersweet, I guess? I just don't know yet.
by nemz
Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deconstruction
Replies: 4
Views: 3694

Re: Deconstruction

Well, that was different. Not sure what to make of this yet in all honesty.
by nemz
Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43659

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

I just assumed she was so caught up in herself that she just didn't talk about it and imagined this place was nothing short of a circus sideshow, in fact that that was what it's claim to fame was, with dehumanization of the staff as expected par for the course. If that's not the case though I don't ...
by nemz
Tue Jan 08, 2013 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 112712

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

ah, so he did. oh well.
by nemz
Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 22906

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

"Indeed. It's a shame to be going back so soon, but we'll still have our memories of this place." WOW. Looking back at that line (I had to boot up the game again just to insure it really was there) after knowing the full scope of things involved gives it a very different reading. Even in ...
by nemz
Tue Jan 08, 2013 3:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 112712

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Well the way things were going, I'd say the breakup was completely inevitable. My guess is that the breakup should be the end of act 2. Act 3 would be about either giving up on her (neutral end) or deciding to start dating the REAL Saki, which would lead to act 4 and either a good or bad end. This H...
by nemz
Tue Jan 08, 2013 3:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43659

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

I agree something doesn't add up, but every time I try and put the pieces together they still don't fit. My original stupid thought was that Lilly was somehow behind all this, but getting Hanako to a specific bar that she's never visited before is just too coincidental for her (or anyone, really) to...