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The latter.

The events of the story itself I don't particularly care for or empathize with, and while it works better in the rewrite it still doesn't really satisfy. I just think it's going too far in criticizing the piece to say it's also completely out of charecter.

It's not just that she butted into things and did what he specifically asked her not to do, but that she did so in the most intentionally hurtful manner she could manage and then when it blew up in her face initially responded with a very off-putting, arrogant front. There might be a few people out ...

Personally, in his place, I wouldn't have forgiven Miki. Ever. She stepped way over the line on that one. Agreed, though just because he latching onto her for support at the end doesn't at all mean he's forgiven her or that they have much of a future together. It just means they didn't end things q...

It's less "No one would ever do this" and more "This doesn't really follow from Hanako's good end." It's goes quite a bit out of it's way to go somewhere different, I'll grant you that. But then again every relationship "bad end" could have become a "good end"...

How is she emotionally cornered in Mendacium? And how do you go from the above to ditching Hisao for a better lay? She's emotionally cornered because she realizes that he isn't able to fufill her needs any more, yet she isn't able to be honest enough with him to either help him improve or to break ...

I can't agree, mostly because she really seems to value her friendships. Can you point to anything in her route that indicates she might be shallow enough to make this scenario work? I can't really see it. Does she, or is it a constant balancing act between needing Lilly, Akira and Hisao's help but...

This is one of the sexiest bits of writting I've seen on this forum despite having no actual intercourse involved. Well done.

Rin seems a little less Rin-y then usual though. I'm suprised she isn't a bit more motormouthed if she's as nervous as she claims.

What she wouldn't do, though, is ditch Hisao because he's a lousy lay, or because she thinks she deserves better. You say this as if it doesn't happen all the time. She'd feel guilty about it, but in the end if he doesn't really satisfy her needs then it isn't going to work out (though it's entirel...

3-1 is the deaf class, as far as I know. It's apparently so overflowing that Shizune (who almost assuredly leads the pack in having her shit together) has to attend a "normal" class. I'd imagine she has a counterpart in class 3-4. I envision the random dude who replaced Lelouch as being p...

Let me try offering solutions instead of just pointing out problems: 1. Reduce the dream to Hisao thinking about it after waking (preferably after his happy little moment of staring at Hanako). This way you can still include the hints of future goings-on as well as his current mindset on such matter...

You'd think he'd be smart enough not to walk around carying a box labled toxic and biohazard. ... wouldn't you? Honestly? No. Oh he'd realize his error halfway through and panic, drawing all the more attention to himself, but in the spur of the moment I can easily him casually strolling around camp...

I don't know if it's fair to say Brogurt got the characters wrong... after all we've never seen them in a cannon situation like this before, so how would we know? In retrospect I do find this oddly plausible behavior for both of them: Hanako has shown a tendency to assume the worst of others, to bla...

Yeah, but I'd like to see him try and find a way to not come across as a pervert while trying to ask for help at a laundry because he has no idea how all these different garments should be washed.

Is he not going to get their clothing washed before he returns it? Seems like kind of a dick move seeing as at least some of the girls made an effort.

Glad you liked it! So does Suzu, I want to repair things between them soon because there are few things better than Hisao and Kenji together in bro mode. Hisao, Kenji, Suzu and Miki ALL in bro mode? Perhaps teaming up to fight evil and boredom and start a kickass garage band? And yes, I caught a fe...