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Okay. Two things: Easy: Be a little more descriptive now and then. Don't go nuts and kill the flow of your dialog or let it interrupt comic timing, but every once in a while it's good to stop and look around, both wider (side details, both world-building and thematic) and deeper (subtlety in express...

Miyako Kitagawa is Hanako's dark side. That's quite insightful on Lilly's part. Does she realize just how close she really is to falling into that other category with Hanako? Very nice passage, that. This is a version of Hisao I don't think we've seen before at all... withdrawn but restless rather ...

Indeed. Colors that don't actually exist in nature are superior to all others.

(Seriously, purple isn't actually a color outside your mind. Google that shit. Now imagine telling Rin.)

DanjaDoom wrote:Also black, apparently.

Rin is available in different colors now? Oooh... I'll take one in purple!

Not since 'nam? Heh. Not sure about the Morgan Freeman line, but otherwise this seems like an unusually helpful Rin.

also, 16 isn't so bad. 13, however, is teh suck.

I agree that the formatting is troublesome, but the story itself is quite good. I'm not really a big fan of Hanako or Lilly, but it was a breath of fresh air to see them dealing so directly with their problems rather than immediately becoming mary sues as so often happens in fics featuring them. You...

If this Hisao came from Rin's neutral ending how does he know about Misha's sexual identity issues? I mean some overlap between routes is fine but that's something she keeps secret and only tells Hisao after things have gotten very serious in Shizune's path. She wouldn't just casually mention that.

2 new snoozu chapters?

You're gonna spoil us giving out goodies like that.

>Implying Niji wouldn't cornhole Hisao too.

Yep, still awesome. The secret lives of teachers is a worthy subject indeed, even if the game didn't think one of them deserved more than 3 expressions and the other didn't even get a sprite.

Yeah, insist. Enough of this 'Darling' bullshit already. (though I appreciate the use of 'skip mode' )

spirizu wrote:“My name is Hisao Nakai and I like pussy.”

I knew right away this was going to be a good one.

First of all, if taking his pills an hourlate could kill him, his life expectation would be abysmal. The excitement is enough justification for a heart attack that you don't need to resort to that trope. More importantly, this seems to contradict everything about Hanako that has been said so far. T...

I still think that though there is blame to go around it is mostly Hanako's fault. If you don't tell people what's wrong how can you possibly expect them to fix it?

Hmm... I didn't think Lilly actually knew about Iwanko until much later.