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by nemz
Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 20221

Re: Clarity: (Complete)

That the precise point of the Good Ending, though. Hisao thought Lilly was right, that she could handle things herself, that she knew best. He thought her independence was a good thing and it wasn't until after she left and he remembered the paper crane that he realized just how important she was t...
by nemz
Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 746498

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

It seems several people in this thread are trying to get into Yamaku with a diagnosis of chronic butthurt.
by nemz
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 20221

Re: Clarity: Part Six (Update 7/22)

Even so, Hisao just coasted and let Lilly handle things and just trusted that she was being honest or she knew what she was doing, kind of rolling over at the first sign of trouble and not even realizing Lilly actually wanted to stay but was afraid of asking. He just coasted because he had no idea ...
by nemz
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 746498

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/30)

...am I the only one who doesn't even care what the big secret is? I'm just perfectly content to forget all about that lingering plotline between updates and enjoy each chapter as a self-contained nugget of hells yeah.
by nemz
Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 79393

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

As much as I want to just enjoy this chapter for what it is, there's too much inevitable doom hanging just out of reach to ever feel comfortable. Bittersweet is too light a word to capture it.
by nemz
Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Me, My Yoke And I (Rin, post bad end)
Replies: 11
Views: 10381

Re: Me, My Yoke And I (Rin, post bad end)

Quality stuff here. It's perhaps a bit much to make Hisao so blatantly unhisaoish, but the conversation at the end is awesome enough to justify it. I also rather like the connection to Kenji, drawing uncomfortable parallels and the fact that his lie about 'coded transmissions' is more honest than he...
by nemz
Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 8/18]
Replies: 26
Views: 12953

Re: (Un)broken (Emi prologue)

Agreed, she does seem to be talking much more 'adult' in fashion than is appropriate. Heck, she almost seems more mature than she is 8 years later.

Also, I think there's a bit of name confusion in the 'crying into my lap' bit.
by nemz
Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Replies: 208
Views: 93268

Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation

Hey, s/he marked it (even though honestly it shouldn't need marking), so you furious 12 year olds have no justifiable reason for complaint just because it isn't something you're into. It's not really my thing either (needs at least one typically biological female ...or perhaps a pair of functional h...
by nemz
Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Funny and weird OS. [HisaoXCharacters]
Replies: 6
Views: 3299

Re: Funny and weird OS. [HisaoXCharacters]

Meh. I still prefer to think it has something to do with these two ladies:

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by nemz
Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 99977

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

This would be what I'm mostly referring to.
by nemz
Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 141028

Re: Shower Scenes

I find myself wishing this chapter came with a simple puzzle game so I can play the home version. :mrgreen:
by nemz
Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nomiya POV
Replies: 2
Views: 2568

Re: Nomiya POV

But not before someone had leaked it to the local newspaper, which had named him prominently on its front page. See, that right there is something that is seriously wrong. With these sorts of allegations people forget entirely any notion of presumed innocence, instead putting the accused immediatel...
by nemz
Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phoenix (Hanako Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 5373

Re: Phoenix (Hanako Bad End one-shot)

Fair enough. In a weird way, even though Hanako's my favouriter character, I preferred her bad end. The good end was a little too saccharine and straightforward, and I felt I hadn't really learned enough about her. Whereas I really liked the badass who stuck up for herself when Hisao's dipshittery ...
by nemz
Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 82245

Re: Real (A Suzu Story) Chapter 10 now up

DanjaDoom wrote:And, uh, that's not Hisao...lol. It's an OC.
Oh yeah... the dude with the eye infection or whatever. Totally slipped my mind.

Well, maybe make an effort to remind us now and then?
by nemz
Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 58307

Re: Scene 8 - The Original Species (part 1)

Helbereth wrote:The book -which I did try to come up with a realistic equivalent for, but my research led nowhere-
Ahem. THIS with a side order of THAT for flavor.