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I don't think she sleepwalked up there at all. She went there on purpose, just waiting for her condition to drop her off the side so it wouldn't technically be suicide.

Bah. In this thread you should just expect everyone has a dick unless specifically told otherwise, regardless of what wildly inappropriate pronouns are being tossed about. Hell, this time around Misha might have two... that's her disability.

Heh, seems perfectly fair turnabout to me.

Dawnstorm wrote:I do know what happens, mind you, just not how to interpret it in a get-the-girl paradigm.

I applaud any effort to create a female Yamaku student able to resist the sweet whispers of the swaggervest and the mysteries of "that new guy smell".

Suzu has so many problems it's getting hard to keep track of them all. I think there are three main problems: - She feels guilt for the death of her brother (which she is in no way responsible for.) - She fears planning for the future (which she also has no rational reason to do.) I'm actually fair...

Karl_Ravech wrote:hisao in total overprotective white knight mode? totally out of character, mang

...You haven't been paying much attention to the official routes, have you?

Or maybe you were being sarcastic. Oh well.

As for her negativity: I sort of agree on that front. I've noticed that my take on all characters is way darker than the source material. It sort feels like I'm writing Katawa Shoujo Noir . I should have done Chandler style first person. 8) Well they are certainly darker than they typically reveal ...

Not sure what to make of this Hanako. She has a strangely 'formal' train of thought, and seems to be much more negative and judgmental then she usually lets on. I suppose this explains Hisao's weirdness. I've had insomnia issues in the past and am sure I came off as similarly 'floaty' and unengaged....

Hate to be the buzzkill, but sex submerged in water (especially natural water sources) is a fantastic way for girls to get infections.

Otherwise a very enjoyable fic.

>You will never have a skullgun installed >You will never kill someone without so much as raising a finger >You will never have orange; you will be stuck forever with lemon-lime Better to go down fighting than end up a sad iron golem sold in flee markets to scare children. I ain't mad, Gunther.

Dawnstorm wrote:If I try too hard, she sounds too ditzy. If I take it back, she sounds too boring. Her enthisiasm falls straight into my writerly blind spot.

I saw her as both a bit ditzy and often boring/shallow so that seems fitting, actually.

themocaw wrote:There was. I removed it. It was sheer porn and didn't serve the plot at all. Also, it completely broke the tone I was developing, of quiet melancholy.

True, but then in the version I saw before that was pretty much the end. I do like this one better.

Needs a real title though.

I remember this from a while back, yeah. Didn't there used to be a blowjob somewhere in the middle though, as part of the "out of sight, out of mind" deal?

Indeed, Hisao seems completely out of it, almost like he's sleepwalking. Or sleep-sprinting? Huh. Emi seemed kind of weird too, though maybe that's just because I'm not used to seeing her from inside, so to speak. Just didn't have that same sort of 'pep' she usually brings to mind. Rin is Rin. :D

Yet the tone of the story is that she was being called by her parents, showing that it wasn't really her choice, as shown by how grateful she was when she ended up staying. (...) What right does he have to help someone he loves? But it clearly is her choice since she's choosing, and she chooses the...