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I don't think you needed to be quite so blunt in pointing out the connection there (trust your readers!), but otherwise it's good stuff as usual.

Well, that was pretty good. I like the terseness of your prose here, every sentence like a knife wound. I don't much like the version of these characters you're offering, but I respect the effort.

It still rustles my jimmies that you keep calling people with a functional dick and balls "girls". Words matter, damn it.

Well that was... unique? I'm not sure exactly what happened here.

I don't think Lilly was lying. It's perfectly reasonable if her mother has problems with japanese names. ...You're kidding, right? If she really didn't know she could just call up Akira, but the 'companion' bit is a backhanded politeness. Perspective Time! I understand their perspective, I just don...

I mean that they are intentionally slighting Hisao and her relationship with him by refusing to use his name. Hisao doesn't realize this because Lilly (surprise!) lies about it.

Very cute story, despite the implied sour note at the end. Jerk parents are jerks, as expected. Especially interesting bit with Akira weirded out by Lilly's mannerisms; I suppose it would be a lot of effort to learn appropriate body language if you can't see it, which might actually explain her habi...

Ugh, texting. The phone is in your hand already, so just call me!

TBH this reads more like an IM though... I mean who the hell uses proper spelling, grammar and capitalization when texting? To be clear, that's not a suggestion to convert it all to "txt spk".

“No,” she concludes, with an air of finality. “I'd have to be very depressed for that to happen. Probably on drugs, too. And you'd have to be the first man I run into.”

Holy shit Rin, that's just cold.

That "wall of full disclosure" line really hits the mark, I've gotta say. It's like reading a biography, stating all the facts and circumstances but never really giving you a picture of who this person really is, inside. And then when she does let her true self show it happens too fast, al...

Aww man... between cotton candy feels and the description of that cake I think you just gave me diabetes.

There is such a thing as "not romantically interested". You can hang around girls constantly without "triggering any flags" at all. Been there done that :-) Sure, but in this case we know that these girls ARE interested, or at least are predisposed to being interested if he give...

I, um... read ahead. It's good stuff, and I'm rather digging this version of Hisao!

Damn this is good stuff. Just... damn.

Rin needs a pet camel spider named Leopold and it and Banana can have adventures and solve crimes.