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- Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Greatest Gift of the Heart
- Replies: 17
- Views: 7717
Re: The Greatest Gift of the Heart
Very good, and a good portrayal of a 'what if' scenario, though there are a few mistakes, or poorly worded parts. He had screwed beyond repair up with her That sounds a little awkward. "He screwed up beyond repair with her." sounds a little better, but still a little clunky. It was impres...
- Wed Apr 11, 2012 1:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Greatest Gift of the Heart
- Replies: 17
- Views: 7717
The Greatest Gift of the Heart
So, on a whim I decided to take a break from the 50+ page epic I've been working on and do a quick tangent. As implied in another thread, I had been thinking about what might have happened if Hisao had not come to Yamaku. This was the result. It's kind of like "It's a wonderful life," but ...
- Tue Apr 10, 2012 9:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Life without Hisao
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6686
Re: Life without Hisao
Maybe you could make it as "it's a wonderful life" style tale where Hisao winds up seeing what would have happened if he hadn't come to Yamaku, and is given a chance to make things right. Do you think you might do that? If you just do it as is, it would be a really depressing story. The p...
- Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Life without Hisao
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6686
Re: Life without Hisao
I shall undoubtedly make the attempt to expand upon this. It wasn't my goal so much to write a depressing hypothesis. More as to show that one person regardless of their understanding of their own self worth can invariably impact the lives of those around them. Thank-you for the constructive advice...
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
- Replies: 103
- Views: 59001
Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
This is good stuff! Please write more!
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Life without Hisao
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6686
Re: Life without Hisao
Depressing. But i suppose it just goes to show that the right man, in the right place, in the right time, can make an entire world of difference. For everyone. I like to think that even the characters who fall by the wayside in the routes you take are touched enough to go on to achieve great things ...
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 89873
Re: The Lamb and The Fox
Excellent fic. Made me feel a lot better about Rin's neutral ending. One thing though, perhaps I'm an idiot but I still don't understand what "You can see the elephant in the boa" means. Can you please spell it out for me? It's in reference to a book called The Little Prince. One of the p...
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 89873
Re: The Lamb and The Fox
Excellent fic. Made me feel a lot better about Rin's neutral ending. One thing though, perhaps I'm an idiot but I still don't understand what "You can see the elephant in the boa" means. Can you please spell it out for me?
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:16 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: 32 Lessons I Learned & Remembered, Thanks to Katawa Shoujo.
- Replies: 15
- Views: 9180
Re: 32 Lessons I Learned & Remembered, Thanks to Katawa Shou
That is an EXCELLENT blog post. I loved it so much i custom made a T-shirt with several of the sayings on it. Thank you for posting it.
- Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
- Replies: 63
- Views: 26336
Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]
I don't think its dead. I messaged Vektar and she said she was still working on it, it just sounded like she had a lot of things coming up.Nakasaro-San wrote:Is this thread dead? I really loved the story, but I'm starting to wonder when more will come...
Woe is me.
- Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 86
- Views: 33092
Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci
I really, really hoped I wouldn't have to do this, but I am officially burnt out on this one for now. I'm very sorry, and I promise it'll be finished soon, but this post is basically to let you guys know that this story is going to be the last one of my ongoing ones finished, purely because I am ou...
- Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Compromised
- Replies: 17
- Views: 10999
Re: Compromised
I liked it! Thank you for your work, you have quite some talent.
- Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)
- Replies: 91
- Views: 110016
Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)
Ah man, don't give up on your own writing! Just keep plugging away! Yeah, like I said I was really considering it, but in the end I just decided on keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. Apparently it worked! Don't worry, I haven't given up. I've written about fifty pages so far and probably...
- Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Regrets (One Shot)
- Replies: 26
- Views: 14534
Re: Regrets (One Shot)
God. That was sad. Especially that bit with Kenji. I'm actually crying.
- Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)
- Replies: 91
- Views: 110016
Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)
I'm patient. Can I have a link to Salty Tears when you're done? You can check up on the team's progress here: http://www.saltysaltystudios.blogspot.com/ I wanted to thank you for writing this fanfic. I had been in a great deal of anxiety after glancing over another very disturbing fic, but this one...