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Let me ask you something: do you want to be forgiven? Would you seek forgiveness even if life didn't kick you when you were down? I'm betting the answer to both questions is "yes". Note it wasn't in the case of Hanako here. As I said, context matters. Truthfully? I don't really know. I've...

Am I the only one who would be willing to give a unfaithful girlfriend a second chance? I mean, maybe it's just because no girl ever expresses interest in me, but if I was dating someone and she wound up having an affair...If I really loved her I would at least attempt to work through the problem ra...

Mirage_GSM wrote:So does this "Earth-27" you set this in exist in canon, or did you make that up?

In the marvel continuity, there are a infinite number of earths, each given a number. Earth-27 appears once, but I don't want to say exactly where because it might spoil a surprise.

Oh right, Magneto's name is Magnus, not Maxwell, isn't it? Seems I focussed to much on the surname. Given what I know about Magneto's background, I think the possibility of an evil - okay, good - twin is slim... Guess, I'll let myself be surprised... Regarding the backstory: I don't know much more ...

I think the problem here is that you quite clearly made Hanako into the badguy in your story and kept trying to tell the readers she was still sympathetic. Nobody bought it and nobody wants to see the villain get a happy ending. Hanako spent her whole life having people think she was a broken perso...

I actually kind of liked it. I mean, the premise was unbelievable, and I am having a hard time seeing Hanako as sympathetic in this story, but you have skill as a writer.

I wasn't aware Magnetos touch can kill, but if you have the suspicion it might do something like that, you shouldnt touch someone to test it. One of Rins paintings seems to be a bad choice for the first visual input to show to a blind person. Even sighted people would be challenged by those. Also, ...

Chapter 4: Development “Hisao, are you alright?” Hanako asked, seeing Hisao clutching his head. “Just aftereffects from the whiskey I think,” he replied, although he wasn't sure at all if that was the case. It was like he was hearing whispering around him coming from his the general direction of his...

Chapter 3. Heart to Heart [So whats on your mind, Shizune?] Sunfire signed as Mary Jane drove down the street. Rin meanwhile was starting out a window with her usual blank expression. [Having trouble with Misha?] Shizune hesitated, she needed advice, yes, but was it a really good idea to trust this ...

A second chapter already? Has this already been written, or are you an extremely fast writer? Alright, now on to your grammer, you seem to have mixed up some homophones, for example, The others shook there [their] heads And theres a few full stops missing. Also, making Hanako bacon? WAHAHAHA! I hav...

I really liked this! It was bit odd almost all the characters wound up becoming teachers, but considering how well written the story is, I don't mind it at all. You are one of my favorite writers, I must say. Loved Scar Tissue, cried my heart out at Regrets, and loved this one, so keep doing what yo...

Chapter 2: The morning after Hisao groaned and got up off the floor, trying to quiet the pounding in his head. He tried to remember what had happened. The food had arrived, they had eaten cake, then Kenji started passing his whiskey bottles around. Hisao groaned a second time, and then a third to em...

Alright, so it's been about one month since I started working on this fic, and I believe I have finally finished it. Now, I am a big fan of Marvel comics, and at one point short after I finished KS, I thought to myself "What if the characters had superpowers?" So I spent some time working ...

Wow, thank you to everyone who liked my fic as much as they did. I honestly wasn't sure if it was any good. To address the most common quibble about "hisao shouldn't have made that much of a difference", the way I see it is that not every interaction with his classmates are explicitly show...

Nice reference to cutter about Hanako using a razor to cut her wrists or was that pure coincidence? Mostly coincidence. I knew about "cutter" but I haven't read it as Doomish's fics tend to freak me out. The only one i got all the way through was Braving the Storm. Which I loved. I got pa...