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Heading into the finale of Act 4. Should be interesting to see where the dice land.

Well, well, well. I have to say, very exceptional work is being done here. I like the way the fic has itself set up here, with Act 2 setting up for the relationship, Act 3 seeing it slowly build but also have slight undertones of future conflict. I think considering the canon Misha I think we all at ...

Right, so, that summer class last July eventually turned into the fall semester that featured prominently my Political Science cornerstone and a spring semester that prominently featured my History cornerstone, and both semesters also featured four other classes. Listen well young lads and lasses ...

This is an interesting pseudo-route to say the least, and one where the conflict actually remains surprisingly balanced, in terms of characters and their motivations. No one in this is entirely right, not even Tetsuo, could be characterized as definitively and unquestioningly in the wrong. Everyone ...

No, not dead, just being put off while I'm attending a summer class for University.

Hope progress is still good Doc. Progress is actually done now, this is the update post. I know that this one is later than promised, but some home issues started acting up. I hope that the quality of the update will be enough to make up for the time it took to get to you all though! Once more, if ...

I detect a 10th Doctor fan. All his dialogue just screams Tennant. Glad to see you're updating again. :D Well, yeah, I'm a fan of the 10th Doctor, but then that's pretty much true for almost all the Doctors (6 was a bit too much of a ponce for me). But this isn't the root of why he's written like ...

Wow, this was... amazing. Seriously, good work with this. I have to admit, when I first read this I was just expecting... I dunno, something just actiony and a sacrifice of the KS aspect of the story to make it line up more with Deus Ex. But you actually managed to fabulously combine both ...

And University was not willing. University was not willing for several weeks. Word to the wise my friends: never start a story when you're expecting to go back to university after Spring Break. Especially when you have around eight different research papers and four finals lined up within the next ...

Oh man. Oh man. Oh man. This section just SCREAMED Cybermen to me, and it was! :o :o :o :o :o Moar Moar Moar! :mrgreen: Glad you're satisfied. Yes, Cybermen, one of the very first and one of the most classic of the Doctor Who aliens, right up there with the Dalek. For this first piece I'd always ...

... Oh God, those bad feels. They're rushing back!

Seriously, another good one shot Fluff. Melancholy/grim work seems to be your cup of tea, and for what it's worth, it looks to me like you're pretty damn good at brewing it.

Heh, you seem to have something for Hisao getting haunted. Maybe you should take up the earlier suggestion of making him a paranormal investigator! In all seriousness, I enjoyed the story. Not quite as many bitch tears as with the Akira story, if only because the twist was a bit more of a blind-side ...

Not sure if ending is April Fool's Day joke, or if entire fic was meant to be April Fool's Day joke.

I suppose we'll see here soon. Regardless, the fic has been nice a read to far, save for the ambiguously troll ending.

Mostly okay, but you managed to concentrate two thirds of your mistakes in one sentence ;-) After he awkwardly explained why he and Misha had suddenly ended the conversation to with Shizune, who m had been completely out of the loop for that time, Hisao was le a d on over to the nurse's office. Oh ...

His eyes drifted. It'd been a habit picked up over the past few days. Always taking constant glances to the periphery of his vision, always watching for anything that might be there. Taking glances to the door to ensure that nothing sat there, watching him from behind layers of clothes that ...