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I need an ice pack after falling out of my desk chair laughing. I've seen enough fanfics to know where this is likely to go Blue balls for Hisao? After this update, looks like you win. There are a few grammar mistakes to be corrected and places where style could be improved, but still good storytell...

Dammit, Doomish. You go and start leading us on with happy writings, then you drop this bomb on us. Beautifully written and dripping with emotion. After she blew up on me and I blew up on her (as the first chapter was, again, almost exactly what happened), we stayed seperate for a while. I wasn't go...

....what in Jesus H. Christ's name did I just read? Congrats, you got me. I was not expecting that.

Well, if Rika is still not willing to listen to him at this point, this is going to be the best end he's going to get. Defending her at this point is the equivalent of mounting a ghost train enroute to a canyon. Isn't she like Emi, in that regard? Emi has the potential to pull a fast one on you by ...

She's assuming responsibility that nobody ever asked of her (except maybe Nurse, but that's beside the point), and is taking all of this to a ridiculously personal extent as a result. Seeing Hisao keep up the running implies that, if this were a KS route, he would've "gone for it" on the ...

Fantastic. It's good to see Hisao starting to come out of his shell to her, and Rika is definitely starting to come into her own, as well. I'm not sure if Miki is a negative influence or not yet, but I'm sure we'll find out as you keep telling this story. She's showing her strength and trying to hel...

Why does everyone always assume that someone who just woke from a year-long coma can just up and take a stroll to the cafeteria without even a wheelchair? Also, it's "oppose" not "appose". Looking forward to the next chapter. That does bring up a good point since muscle atrophy ...

So it looks like this is a retelling of Emi's and Shizune's routes to incorporate each other, no? Love triangle action is always interesting. Shizune definitely seems like she would be the jealous type (I'm actually thinking about exploring this a bit). I'm not sure what I think of the differing tex...

Just started reading this yesterday, apparently just in time for a fresh update. After reading the premise behind Rika as a character, I wasn't sure I would like her that much. Despite this, you've characterized her in a very appealing way: Emi's eyes-in-front, day-by-day attitude, Rin's sense of ad...

I don't think the implication is that Nomiya is the physically abusive type. Being physically abused by parents has more side effects than bruises. There's often a lot of emotional abuse that goes on at the same time, so he might be alluding to Rin being emotionally and/or mentally abused by Nomiya'...

Correct me but isn't high school in Japan only 3 years on a trimester schedule? Yeah, this is correct. One of those plot holes in contradiction to reality, but it's not that huge to the plot so far. Can just advance them backwards. This is meant to take place after Emi's arc, and she doesn't mentio...

I was just going on my own educational background, which will inevitably cause discrepancies.

I'm a bit confused... Why is Hisao no longer in Mutous class? If you got the classes correct, Hisao, Hanako, Shizune and Misha changed into Emi's class and Mutou is now teaching the blind class Lilly was in^^° Hrm... I didn't really pay much attention to which class Emi was in, never noticed it bei...

This is a writing exercise as much as a fanfiction. It follows the Emi good ending, but with a bit of my own head-canon, which will be revealed throughout the course of the work. A lot of it mentioned in these early writings. Because this is a fledgling work, I am not sure what direction it's going ...

Definitely entertaining, if only for Jigoro's random outbursts of anger and frustration at everything. On a side note, the line "Where's the kid who's sleeping with my daughter?!" has made me decided that Jigoro should have Mr. Satan's voice from the Funimation dub of DBZ. I am not sure ho...