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I've been in a rut recently. Writing lots of one-shots. And I really like this one, so I wanted to share with the renai. It's a slice of life-type story taking place after Shizune's good end. There's also erotic content, much in KS's style. It's also very long. Pastebin is included for people that ...

Doomish wrote:Now this is a story I can get behind.

You owe me a new pair of sides.

Update time. I actually wrote this one separate from my outline, because I felt like I had a few holes that I needed to fill at this point. Chapter 3: Phantom pastebin: http://pastebin.com/XpgzZePX The head nurse in charge of Emi's case feels... frustrated, to say the least. Her outburst was not ou...

Well, if you're running for 30 minutes, you wouldn't usually call it a sprint . Sprints are 100m, 200m or 400m distances, all of which should be finished in well under 30 minutes. That's why I thought you might be sarcastic here... It wasn't intended to be sarcastic, more that it was just 30 minute...

- She is, presumably, meeting the nurse for the first time. The way it's written, it seems like she already knows who he is. It's meant to be written to imply that Meiko has already met him, but Emi hasn't. I'll probably touch that up for clarity. - Emi is 11 here, as you've said. How might that af...

I'm also posting chapter 2, because I feel comfortable with it and chapter 1 isn't exactly conducive to a cliff-hanger. Chapter 2: Awake pastebin: http://pastebin.com/DP2yNaJh Emi wanders through the void, her mind still absent from the physical realm. She is lost, alone in the dark. She can't feel...

Emi is my favorite girl. This is my Emi fic. It had to come around eventually. (Un)broken: An Emi Prologue Table of Contents Chapter 1: Zero Chapter 2: Awake Chapter 3: Phantom Chapter 4: Falling After You Chapter 5: From Ashes ... Chapter 1: Zero pastebin: http://pastebin.com/yZZ3szje Blood pulses...

Double post for update? Double post for update. Alright, boys and girls. There's a good chunk of change to this post. First of all, new writing. This is the new chapter 3, taking place between "The Maw" and "Fear No Evil." It's meant to expand on Hanako's issues, give more motiv...

As far as I'm concerned, the whole chapter is a upward curve leading to the end. The previous chapter provides enough closure for those who prefer a 'realistic' ending, especially if you rework the thing in a slower pace. In a way, it's cool, we got two ending radically different but that will suit...

I'm working on redoing parts of part 3. Probably going to have 2 more chapters exploring Hanako's mental degradation, because it feels too fast and lacks motivation. I'll post those later. But, for the people who want to actually have the story continue (and for her birthday), the conclusion. It's ...

I suppose, but what I'd expect would be more along the lines of a catatonic episode like during her birthday. And she still has Naomi and Natsume, and with them, the knowledge that she can make friends on her own like anybody else. We don't know all the details of her relationship with Naomi and Na...

so what was the party that you mentioned as taking the easy way out anyway? Cutting. I originally wanted to have her overdose, but that was... difficult to write a followup for. At this point I'm just wishing you go baller with that and do an actual grim ending rather than a rehash of a certain Lat...

Inspiration strikes. A quickly written update. Chapter 4: Fear No Evil pastebin: http://pastebin.com/1BR8WPNX Morning. Early again. I somehow managed to get some sleep last night, even with all of the weekend's events: Lilly's facade of perfection melting away, Hanako's second outburst, the cruelty...

I still think that though there is blame to go around it is mostly Hanako's fault. If you don't tell people what's wrong how can you possibly expect them to fix it? Although I'll agree with nemz, blaming Hisao alone for the whole thing is kinda cheap, since Lilly's diplomatic performance was less t...

Update time, here's chapter two. Chapter 2: The Maw pastebin: http://pastebin.com/8EYWZAJe The sun comes early the next morning. I came back to my room early to catch up on the homework so cruelly slapped on us before the long weekend, but nothing got done. I didn't sleep well, either. Hanako's bee...