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This feels a lot like a Deus Ex crossover, to some degree. And it's well written? I'm throwing money at the screen, Meadows.

Part of my confusion was the mention of Hisao having lunch on the roof with Emi & Rin. I don't think that happens if you're on Shizune's path. But that's a minor continuity error. I think it happens regardless of who's path you're on, just to establish Emi and Rin as friends. Even if it doesn't...

I like it! Sweet, and a nice ending as well. I assume this is a standalone piece? Yeah, it's standalone. >Come on. We have a friend to go comfort. >To go comfort >Comfort As Scissorlips noted, I really just couldn't resist. :) This was a great story, I liked it! It was done very well for how short-...

EDIT 9/17/2012: I've been writing a lot of Shizune lately. In an effort to not muck up the board with multiple single-page threads, I'm just going to convert this thread into a source for all of my Shizune one shots. Table of Contents Dance in the Moonlight Shine On You (this post) A Long December ...

Update before bed. Also updated the OP. I skipped ahead pretty far for this one, just to get to what I think will be the good parts of the story. Chapter 5: From Ashes pastebin: http://pastebin.com/3Dm7F6CS It's been two months since the accident. Two months of grieving, of minor celebrations as Em...

Rika's one year behind Emi in school, but Emi is one year older than everyone else in her grade due to her time stuck in the hospital/therapy. But Rika is (jokingly) presented as a potential romantic interest for Hisao. I cannot imagine, even in a April Fool's joke, they would have her be under 18....

Rika's only one year younger than Emi. But aside from that, this was a really entertaining chapter. I think you've got Emi's voice much better than you did before. Rika's one year behind Emi in school, but Emi is one year older than everyone else in her grade due to her time stuck in the hospital/t...

Actually I think this stands pretty well on its own. I'm not sure what a sequel could add. I whole heartedly agree, people that want more just want smut Actually, people asking for more seem to be more interested in the Aki-Hisao dynamic. Being shoved into fatherhood, learning to love a child who i...

It's been called to my attention that I haven't updated this thread in a while, even though I've still been working on the story. Time to fix that. Chapter 4: Falling After You pastebin: http://pastebin.com/fWxzn0R0 Ryota holds his daughter in his arms, her mind fallen off into the wonderland of sl...

Got the inspiration for this one a couple days ago, mostly just had one scene that I really wanted to write. Enjoy, you guys. One Wish pastebin: http://pastebin.com/nC53R0qs Lilly's passing was all so sudden. One day, she was with us. And now, she was gone. Even though we - the doctors, her family,...

This week is chock full of feels, it seems.

that guy's Emilogue finale? Check.
Suzu route bad end? Check.

What's next, Rika route good end comes out of nowhere?

I'm going to go lie down for a while.

But seriously, good work. Absolutely heart-wrenching.

FemHisao going full BDSM mode on futaShizune....

Why the hell am I okay with this?

This is good stuff so far. Short, sweet. I like it. Question: It's implied that the opening part of the chapter takes place right at the end of Hanako's finale CG. Isn't that their actual first kiss? Your opening sentence says otherwise, but I think the canon is that it's the first one. Here's hopin...

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Mirage_GSM wrote:So Lilly wears her bra to bed?

Why not. If it bothers you, then I'll change it.

I've never met a girl who wears her bra to bed. The hooks dig into her back.

Part two. ---------- I'll be damned if this couch isn't the most comfortable couch I've ever laid on. Misha actually turned out to be a pretty decent cook, preparing an extravagant meal for the five of us. Jigoro left for the wilderness afterward, and I ended up just laying down on the sofa for an ...