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My favourite chapter so far, and your Miki is the only dark one I have seen, (Other than the one in one of Doomish's stories) and I can appreciate that. Glad to see the story is still alive!

Thank you so much finally getting around to finishing this, I had lost nearly all hope of this getting a conclusion, and then I see the update on the fanfiction board, I literally let out a cheer...at 5 in the morning when I saw this. I think the ending was a bit too rushed, and that Rika seemed to ...

The world in this story is just as bleak, if not even more so, than the worlds portrayed in The Walking Dead and Darker Than Black, but like both series, you managed to keep some warmth in it, even though there wasn't that much, and it was also extremely well-written, kudos on this awesome story.

Loved it, maybe it's because I am a huge Metallica fan and made the connection to "One" in the first sentence, but this is one of my favourite fan fics I've read in the past few months. And Kenji being in it, even though he only had one line, was awesome.

This was a fun read it was, interesting, well written, and action packed. And the fact that I was listening to the Deus Ex: HR soundtrack during this made this all that much better, thank you for writing this!

Sorry for digging this back up, but I stumbled across this and was tempted to try my hand at it, so I made a few, let me know what you think. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hisao%20Bravo&cardtype=Spell&subtype=normal&attribute=Light&level=1&magictraptype=Continuous&rarity ...

I liked it a bit more as a one-shot, but feel free to continue.
I personally think that negative criticism is just as good as positive, and constructive is the best, and if you are going to complain about criticism at all, you shouldn't be a writer, but that's just my view.

An excercise in "How many metaphors can I cram into one chapter?" I blame Literature Composition class. And another case of "That guy needs to see a psychiatrist." I said I changed more than I intended to, but I had no intentions of changing that, and pretty much every character in KS (other than a ...

Once again, I am sorry for the long delay, I was extremely busy during the summer. Even when summer ended, school decided to destroy my free time with homework and projects. A bunch of house renovations, trying to find a new house to move to, and other things has kept me from writing. Even when I ...

It was really good timing when The End by My Chemical Romance started playing on my ipod when Hisao got his heart attack.
Really good, and depressing chapter.

Hisao isn't going to last long in an apocalypse with that heart condition of his.

OtakuNinja wrote:Reminded me a bit of HOTD... Or maybe all high school apocalypses start that way? ^^'
Suggestion:Jigoro and Kenji team up and save the world

That's what I was thinking.

I personally am really enjoying this so-far, it is well-written and is a very interesting premise. Random observation, when I saw the title of the story (Downward Spiral) I immediately thought of the Nine Inch Nails album also named that, and when I saw the prologue title (The Fall) I thought it ...

I think you guys are nitpicking a tad much remember that in fiction, characters say, do, and are put in situations because the author intend them to it's silly to say, why didn't x character tell y character this or that to clear up a misunderstanding - the author intends there to be that ...

I can't believe I never realized this got updated.
I liked the last two chapters, and the fact that your Miki is unique enough to separate her from the other Miki's but remains close enough to the premise that made us all love Miki in the first place.

I was writing the next chapter for The Foreigner earlier, and this idea randomly popped up, I couldn't get it out of my head so here you go. Hisao plays Slender The room is almost pitch black, the only thing illuminating the space is a digital clock reading 01:12 A.M. and casting a faint, orange ...