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Engineer? Well, that's... interesting. Though I wonder what he'll talk about as a teacher. Probably just something about sentries and the like.

Not gonna lie....this one made laugh 'till I cried at the end.

"Imagine this with fingers." Not sure why but I burst out laughing there, I really love Miki's personality in this, sorta reminds me of Emi's once you get further into her path, without making me feel like a pedophile of course. Hope you continue this or at least do something similar in th...

Interesting and thoroughly depressing, but is it really fan fiction? I'm not trying to be an ass about it but, as this is more of speculation than anything I'd think it'd go under general discussion. But what's done is done and I think it would be interesting if you expanded on it like Bob said, thi...

I just re-did the first chapter, except it really changes the story as a whole.
I like the new direction it's taking more In my own opinion

advicefrog wrote:Off to a good start, please don't ruin this.

Hopefully you don't mind the major changes I've made. And I'll try my best.

Okay, but you seem to be missing the point. after all I'm a terrible speed writer, I don't get why you would have to be a "speed writer" at all. The idea would be to slow down, become more careful, and work on reducing your flaws. :| And that's my problem, I can't take ANYTHING slow. I ha...

I really, really hoped I wouldn't have to do this, but I am officially burnt out on this one for now. I'm very sorry, and I promise it'll be finished soon, but this post is basically to let you guys know that this story is going to be the last one of my ongoing ones finished, purely because I am ou...

Just thought I'd give you all an update, considering it's been nearly a week. I have, in fact, less work on the next chapter than I did the last time I posted. I didn't like the way I started this next chapter, so I scrapped it, and I've got nothing now. So yeah. And now for some overdue responses ...

So your OC is half blind, hard of hearing, missing a foot and has burn-scars? Is he going to lose a hand soon as well, or do you think you've done enough to him already? Also, having the protagonist blatantly address the readers and tell them his life-story is about as close as you can get to writi...

Chapter 2: Arrival The scenery passes quickly, me not even bothering to absorb the details myself, I wouldn't be able to enjoy the outdoors much on the account of my leg, I'd even need someone to walk into town with or for me to get supplies. I hate depending on others. I am currently in a smelly, c...

So this guy's a left foot-less male version of Hanako who magically learned a good amount of Japanese in a short amount of time? Sounds good, although it might make more sense to just make him go in at the same time as Hisao (as a replacement for him or if he'll be seeing Hisao as well). Unless His...

A/N: This story is sort of being re-done, I feel as though while I have a decent premise to start the story on, I was running blind, and I hated that. So, I'm taking a more definite approach this time, (I have a definite outline) and trying something a little, unique, something I am yet to see in a ...

I'm keeping an eye on this, just to see if the becomes something. If this happens I might get back into TF2 And also I really want Lilly to be the Demo, half-scottish, eye problems, likes to drink, it's BRILLIANT! (And Emi=Scout, I mean come on, who else could do it?)

Spoiler tagging everything, just in case. Lilly: "Healthy adolescent sex drive", "We're just two kids pretending to be adults aren't we?", and "Our pasts may be scattered and at times overshadowed by sadness, but they´re also an irrevocable part of our lives and personalitie...

I never had problems, I apparently got lucky hehe...
Anyway, that sucks, but missing out on bad and neutral endings isn't too terrible, as long as it isn't Rin's neutral (My god, that ending man, that ending *shudder*).