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>These comments Adam Jensen = Hisao Megan Reed = Lilly David Sarif = Mutou Faridah Malik = Hanako Francis Pritchard = Kenji Hugh Darrow = Nomiya Yelena Fedorova = Miki Can't think of any others. Why would you do this? I am not up too rewriting all of Deus Ex:HR. I see Nomiya as Barret simply becaus...

>These comments Adam Jensen = Hisao Megan Reed = Lilly David Sarif = Mutou Faridah Malik = Hanako Francis Pritchard = Kenji Hugh Darrow = Nomiya Yelena Fedorova = Miki Can't think of any others. Why would you do this? I am not up too rewriting all of Deus Ex:HR. We were making jokes, that's all, or...

I don't understand what happened here...

I can see where this is going...start with the good one and then make two other versions that go down hill from there. (obviously, or at least, that's what I think.)

I was considering doing either serious Dues Ex/Katawa Shoujo cross-over or a different cross-over, looks like I'll be doing the other one since you already did this. Wait I just thought about three more story ideas. Damn you mind! But I do like this, though six parts doesn't seem like much to explor...

I see the scars on your avatar, they look suspiciously similar to Hanako's, too suspicious...

This story is probably my favorite that you have written, so far. It is a nice twist on Hanako's past. AT The beginning I was feeling some sort of deja vu, but you took the story in a different direction. The only thing that felt a little off to me was how the letter survived the fire... There wasn'...

Oh god, your avatar, it's back to normal, that's not good. Someone's gonna die.
I am actually not too surprised that Rin would be the person Iwanako/Death talks to the most. It makes sense, for some reason...

Note: I have final exams next week and a few projects I have to finish up, so my time writing will be cut down quite a bit for the next two weeks, enough to still work on the story, just not as much as I would like to __________________________________________________________________________ Chapter...

NOTE: Before someone mentions how Lilly leaves for Iverness in the cannon, since it looks like Hisao has taken the Hanako good path, don't worry I have an explanation for that later in the story. Dude, it's your story. You're already off canon, so don't worry about it. And if Lilly left for Inverne...

...some of these man, just...I don't know what to say about them. Others did make me feel fuzzy inside, which is a definite plus. And I actually enjoyed the troll chapter, hadn't seen one of those in a while.

Looks like I was wrong, there were two more chapters and an epilogue, but my thoughts remain pretty much the same.
The comedy parts were the best. This story had me laughing quite a bit.

So, death finally died? For some reason that actually makes sense. Maybe because I see him more as a grim reaper than actual death, if that makes sense. EDIT: If anyone has noticed that my Iwanako avatar remains unchanged, wait a few hours. It'll look different when you come back. I am, of course, p...

I am enjoying the story thus far, though like others have said, there is quite a bit of dead air in there towards the end. At which point exactly ? I honestly thought the Enhanced Edition addressed that. I didn't realize you had changed it. I read it actually before any other posts were made, I jus...

At the time you're reading this, it's been a week or so since my last update, and I'm sorry about this. I unfortunately got banned for a week for breaking a rule on the forum I had forgotten about. That is why this chapter will go up later than when I actually wrote it. _____________________________...