Throughout the whole story, the buildup to what it was going to be like when we finally got Emi's perspective again was strong. I wasn't sure how it could work, but the final chapter delivered excellently. You really stuck the landing on this one, great work.
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- Fri Jul 19, 2024 2:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions [Completed]
- Replies: 31
- Views: 8297
- Fri Mar 08, 2024 1:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions [Completed]
- Replies: 31
- Views: 8297
Re: Intentions
Excellently done! Kept me engaged from the start all the way through so far! Looking forward to whatever comes next! Not sure how that went. If anything I wonder how the school could fail to check up on her, after she a) was at the scene when it happened and b) was missing classes and the mandatory ...
- Mon Feb 12, 2024 5:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
- Replies: 30
- Views: 80396
Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Victim: brythain Prompt: "A restaurant scene in which one cast member is introducing others to a cuisine (or dish) that they have never tasted before. And it's Christmas." I went ahead changed "Christmas" to "Holiday season" because I'm late as usual. In my defense I actually worked on Christmas ...
- Thu Dec 28, 2023 10:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
- Replies: 30
- Views: 80396
Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Victim: brythain Prompt: "A restaurant scene in which one cast member is introducing others to a cuisine (or dish) that they have never tasted before. And it's Christmas." I went ahead changed "Christmas" to "Holiday season" because I'm late as usual. In my defense I actually worked on Christmas ...
- Sat Jun 03, 2023 2:54 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizune's route consensus over 10 years later?
- Replies: 16
- Views: 62214
Re: Shizune's route consensus over 10 years later?
Most of the points I wanted to make have already been made in this thread (or in AuricOrange's wonderful essay). The characters don't go through much growth or are annoying in the first place. The choice you get is poorly framed and feels like a slap in the face. The plot points don't really click ...
- Mon Mar 20, 2023 11:41 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Russian pun
- Replies: 4
- Views: 11084
Re: Russian pun
Unfortunately this pun is not translatable. KS-pun.png But I will still try. Its Russian classic anecdotes about Russian spy in WW2 Germany -- Stierlitz. Often it has some game of words, like in that one. Stierlitz was shooting blindly. The blind(ly) fell like a downed He killed the downed one last ...
- Wed Dec 28, 2022 12:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
- Replies: 24
- Views: 52188
Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
First of all, don't blame yourself, I'm still happy you did something for me. And to be fair, you surprised me. I expected, with such a prompt, to read something Hanako-related, but I was surprised, in the good way, to see that I was wrong, and for that, thank you. I'm quite difficult when it comes ...
- Mon Dec 26, 2022 2:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
- Replies: 24
- Views: 52188
Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Here's my year-late submission for Razoredge. I don't have a terribly good excuse, I just suck. I bent the rules of the prompt slightly, but it is my hope that I still retained the spirit of it somewhat. I wanted to get it out on Christmas(ish) so I didn't take the time to get it proofread. If ...
- Sun Nov 07, 2021 11:39 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Has anyone made an archive for the fanfics?
- Replies: 16
- Views: 28383
Re: Has anyone made an archive for the fanfics?
I just want to know because if there isn't then I wouldn't mind making one I think a lot of us would appreciate that, myself included. The best way to archive the fanfics would be to move them to ao3, that site is the most popular fan fiction host today and every year they have a fund raiser to ...
- Tue Jun 15, 2021 3:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 27/7/2024)
- Replies: 68
- Views: 92980
Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/3/2021)
As others have mentioned, it's becoming increasingly harder to imagine a happy ending coming from this. Honestly, if I were one of Hisao's friends, I'd probably be encouraging him to try to move on myself. There really is no good, clear resolution to this problem, and the helplessness that pretty ...
- Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:45 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay
- Replies: 50
- Views: 91664
Re: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay
This was one hell of a post and thread. I hardly know what to say. In any case, excellent blog post, Citrus. I was quite surprised to find so many people questioning the point of such an analysis in the first place. To criticize the specific points made, especially in light of how many assumptions ...
- Tue Feb 16, 2021 9:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
- Replies: 60
- Views: 89297
Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Oh, sorry. I thought it was clear enough that I was joking. Will play it more safe in the future.
- Mon Feb 15, 2021 9:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 980866
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210215 You And I Both)
... Okay, so apparently people DIDN'T want to start the new year by reading some Oddball. That's fine. I'm okay. :cry: Awww, you deserve better than that. For my part, my online university education has left me quite burned out on reading, analyzing, and responding to text, so I haven't been as ...
- Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
- Replies: 60
- Views: 89297
Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
When reading this Secret Santa Submissions I always think about what I would have done if that prompt had reached me. Most of the time I feel thankful that it didn't :-) This time I almost immediately had a picture in my mind of Hisao organizing a Christmas party with the Student Council and ...
- Thu Feb 11, 2021 4:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
- Replies: 60
- Views: 89297
Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Ah, my prompt was completed! It's a Christmas miracle! Honestly, the prompt wasn't something I put a ton of thought into. I think I envisioned a sort of comedy-focused story, and when I realized Hanako and Rin would be interacting I thought that was what I was getting. In the end though, this really ...