It's coming people, I'm half way through the next chapter.
(New job and crazy hours don't help much)
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- Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
- Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
- Replies: 170
- Views: 1935957
Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
I actually was looking at this a while ago, but when I went back to get the template it was gone, (they are moving their forms around or some such) I'd just like the perimeters the questions ask, is all. Sorry for the late reply. Link on new forums is here. http://somnovastudios.org/forum/viewtopic ...
- Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies
Nothing like that. Part of my job for the past 7 years has been to watch people and to figure out behavior. Give me 3-6 months and I can tell you anything you want to know about your behaviors, and most likely many things you didn't want to know. I watch people, thats what I'm good at. Don't ask me ...
- Sun May 20, 2012 1:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
Just finished catching up and I'm loving your portrayal of Rin so far. I have a question though: Hisao is talking about getting an apartment before going to Uni. This story is set during the summer holidays right? Rin and Hisao don't graduate until spring so is Hisao being pre-emptive? Surely they ...
- Thu May 10, 2012 7:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies
Another great fic. How do you manage to get the "Rin" into the parts where she's just thinking to herself? I always had trouble seeing where her thoughts came from or where they would/could go. Do you put yourself into some kind of exotic Zen meditation or something else? ;) Nothing like that. Part ...
- Fri Apr 27, 2012 11:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
Oh sure, but that's dealing her motivations, not the way those motivations lead to action. Regardless the form the encounter took was clearly of the 'no limbs that end in fingers allowed' variety and given the trouble he's having sticking to those ground rules additional restraint might be needed ...
- Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
Retaining some kind of assemblance of control over things? Or maybe it was her way of saying "thanks,"?nemz wrote:Was there some other reason she kept telling him this was sex by soccer rules?
- Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
nemz wrote:I'm almost suprised she didn't find something to tie his hands behind his back with. Oh well, cuteness abounds but it's mixed with nervous trepidation for what the nurse might have to say.
LMAO, mmm, tying his hands up eh? Interesting idea.
- Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
Here's the next chapter enjoy (with thanks to CommnderShepard) Unease. The car ride back to Yamaku was filled with small talk between my father, mother and myself, with Rin only breaking her silence every so often. We talked about my future and where it would lead me. It was interesting, I never ...
- Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bunnies, tightjackets and cosplaying [Rin,Hanako mainly]
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7264
Re: Bunnies, tightjackets and cosplaying [Rin,Hanako mainly]
The hell did I just read?
- Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 91892
Re: The Lamb and The Fox
Excellent fic. Made me feel a lot better about Rin's neutral ending. One thing though, perhaps I'm an idiot but I still don't understand what "You can see the elephant in the boa" means. Can you please spell it out for me? It's in reference to a book called The Little Prince. One of the pieces of ...
- Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 39082
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
The last chapters are really good. You have made impressive progress in balancing Rinisms, descriptions, and dialog. But you really need to work on your times. You still mix present and past, and with such a good story, it becomes very jarring to stumble on a past tense in the middle of a present ...
- Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:50 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Fanart roundup
- Replies: 94
- Views: 58032
Re: Fanart roundup
My god, there are so many D'aawwws to be had.
- Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A guy's luck (TF2 Crossover)
- Replies: 25
- Views: 12543
Re: A guy's luck (Self-Insertion/TF2 Crossover)
Couldn't read it. Tried a few times, but just couldn't do it. Why not? It seems okay to me. Okay, lets put it to you this way, You have a story, it's a good story, so you make a game about it. It's a feel good kinda story. Then someone else has a story, it's a blow shit up story. That's cool right ...
- Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blood Bank (aka "Feels for Jigoro") - Updated 4/5
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3888
Re: Blood Bank (aka "Feels for Jigoro") - Updated 4/5
This is good, I like where it could go.