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CRAPPY UPDATE SCHEDULE, HO! Part 3 only because it's balls long, enjoy, thanks to Slartibartfast on Steam for the proofread, R&R and tell me if anything sounds stupid. ----- Part 3: Shock & Awe “Are we there yet, man?” I sighed loudly, still leading Kenji down the street to the park near Yam...

Scissorlips wrote:

Vekter wrote:I just got back from a convention; I'll do some work on it tomorrow and hopefully have the next part up very soon.

PAX or Sakuracon? o:

Neither! Middle Tennessee Anime Convention.

Nakasaro-San wrote:Is this thread dead? I really loved the story, but I'm starting to wonder when more will come...






Woe is me.

Nah, it's not dead.

I just got back from a convention; I'll do some work on it tomorrow and hopefully have the next part up very soon.

Another EXCELLENT chapter. Keep them coming, bro.

I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this. Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though. EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't k...

Damn it, you... you keep bein' awesome, Rikabro. I can't say anything past that; it's fantastic.

Vekter - curse you and your avatar for making me picture the Yuuko Daki as she rolled around in her bed. Your scene was unintentionally erotic. That said, I love the abrupt transition between parts 1 and 2. Straight from delicate, pining Yuuko to insane, insane Kenji. Really builds a beautiful cont...

Title suggested 'war', but I'm guessing this meant something else. 'Thousand Yard Stare' depicts the 'eyes' most soldiers had when he/she experienced the horrors of war--though it translates to something else in this regard. 'Appeasement' is the move made by Neville Chamberlain to appease German Ch...

Not a bad start. The transition in point of view between the two parts isn't bad, though it threw me off for a moment. I have no idea where the story is going, so I can't say for sure, but a Yuuko perspective might have worked for consistency's sake. That's just a nitpick though. Things seemed to m...

Hey guys! Here's my first KS fic. I hope you guys enjoy it. I'll try to complete Parts 3 and 4 soon(tm). Read, review, etc. please! (Think of each part as a scene. Also, erotica will be in later parts and I'll write it so you can skip it if you don't like that kind of thing.) EDIT 6/26: I've proven ...

Keep being awesome, Rikabro.

Good stuff man, good stuff. Can't wait to see some more.