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it wasn't until the line "she took me from the shelf" that I realized it was a real person (per say) in the room that was talking
That was the idea, but I wasn't sure what the reader would think when it happened - that's what I was most curious about. I wanted it to seem like a normal narrative ...

random wrote:I'm assuming this is the Manly Picnic continuity

Just a non-Lilly and non-Hanako of any kind, I guess. AltU where Hisao didn't go to Yamaku? Doesn't really matter, doesn't need to fit anywhere.

Quick read.
Got feedback? Yes, please.
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Hanako wasn't home when the knock came at her door. A female student on the other side asked if she was there, and after no response came, the girl left after an unheard invitation to join them at the park for games later. It was ...

Although, sometimes it flows a little too quickly to properly grasp, I dare say. It took Scissorlips' comment to make me realize that Hanako's story was about Mother's day.
I for sure knew that when I was writing it, it sped through some parts too quickly. It's my least favourite of the few so far ...

"Sa-weeeeet! Time to team up again!"
"Can we please get it done this time? If we screw up another assignment I probably won't pass."
"Don't just blame me, I don't fall asleep during class."
"But you don't do any work while I'm asleep..."

Noisily sliding her desk over to her friends' and plopping ...

Ikezawa Hanako - Saturday May 12th
My Mental Diary: I'll Be Sure To Write It Down Later...


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Why did Lilly have to make me come to class today... she probably knows I can't focus on my work...
...but I guess she thinks that it's best that I try anyways. I ...

Late in the day, an hour after all classes had ended, a teacher and student sat by the windows of their classroom. The student stared at her easel; and the teacher at her student. The only colour on the paper was the orange from the sky outside. This identical scene took place almost every day for ...

Thanks guys, I'll be posting them locally now instead of linking, and will do one story at a time. In this case it at least may be have been more obnoxious to create three new threads just for my own stories, but going forward it'll be one at a time, and in-thread. I imagined that huge blocks of ...

New user here, only been posting in KSG until now. I read the stickys, please feel free to inform me of any unwritten rules I should know about here.
Also, obviously looking for feedback before I move on to other things. I don't think I have the patience to write anything much longer than these, I'm ...

How come the link to Emi's doesn't work?