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by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:12 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Other Media that gave you "The Feels."
Replies: 290
Views: 90348

Re: Other Media that gave you "The Feels."

Grave of the Fireflies.


That is all.
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 44803

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Seven 6/9/12)

Finally getting around to commenting this. Seems like sight-inhibited students at Yamaku inavriably develop a preference for drinking tea in unused classrooms :-) Heh, true. Though it could be explained by the fact that people who do not rely on sight would feel more at ease in quiet places, as thei...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Left Behind - Taxi ride to the airport (Driver's POV)
Replies: 6
Views: 3228

Re: Left Behind - Taxi ride to the airport (Driver's POV)

This story, along with Oddball's gives me a whole new perspective on taxi drivers. I almost want to write one meself. Well done.
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92553

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

https://www.google.com/search?q=Every+cloud+has+a+silver+lining I don't know how you can use that phrase and not be aware that it's an idiom And through blind luck, he stumbled upon an expression which meaning he ignored, and, having found it pretty, adorned his text with it. Little did he know tha...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92553

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

My guess is that she realize because of her personality, Hisao didn't confess to her earlier (the panic attack Though his timeline is little off, she had the attack right before her birthday/Lilly leaving for Scotland and their park confession is before Lilly got back That's it. Concerning timeline...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92553

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

In short, she feels that if she didn't have a panic attack, she and Hisao 'could have been together for months' (sic). Now any 'normal girl' would have gone "Oh well I done goofed but it's all better now". Hanako, not so much. I tried to convey the fact that she was already in a weakened s...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92553

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch2 up)

Top post has now been edited with a full update. You'll have a hard job missing it. It's somewhat long. Love this, you are very good. Hope to read more soon. You wishes are my command. Making the girl a Mary Sue tends to be a trope that turns me away from stories. Though this one doesn't accentuate ...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manly Pick-Me-Up (Post Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 14
Views: 9187

Re: The Manly Pick-Me-Up

This is awesome, made me smile and chuckle and a bit warm and fuzzy. But who the [censored] doesn't like cheesecake? I also can't help but notice that we are both plagued by the Comittee of Verbal Safety. I've eliminated two of their watchdogs already, through cleverly-crafted insulting slurrs. I ca...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 744163

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/6)

I...uh...hi...uhm...bye. *Twenty minutes later.* The feelings are gone now. Good Lord, Sir, you're really good at doing this. I already said that. It doesn't matter. You're great. Seals of approval, Crowns of Skillfull Writing and Ribbons of Astute Scene Designing to you. And...stuff. Now on to the ...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Truth About Kenji (a short fanfic in three acts)
Replies: 32
Views: 13902

Re: The Truth About Kenji

We warned you about it, Hisao. You should have listened to us and stayed away, Hisao. None of us wanted this to happen, Hisao. You can only blame yourself for this, Hisao. You shouldn't have gotten so close to the Rainbow Wizard, Hisao. And know It has seized your mind. PS: Is it bad that this fic ...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 11/18)
Replies: 86
Views: 34493

Re: Blackout (erreybody)

Hearthwarming.

See what I did there?

But yes, it's a really sweet bonding moment between the gurls. I liked it a lot.
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 8757

Re: Moonlight Sonata

I'm not a writer, and I have some difficulty interpreting my thoughts into words. I hope that this captures the scene as it payed out in my mind. I somehow doubt it, but I tried. I know exactly what you mean. It can be really frustrating at times. But that, sir, is a neat and original piece of fict...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue May 29, 2012 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 744163

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)

by Scissorlips » Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:35 am For real ? This was sitting there all this time, and I discover it only now ? Give me a minute. *comes back with a bloodied forehead.* ...That's more like it. Now. Sir. This isn't good. This isn't great. This is one of the goddamn best fanfic I've ever read...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue May 29, 2012 7:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 15920

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

@Ascended Flutist That's a good one, and sad. I think all haikus about Hanako are bound to be sad :( It would be a challenge to write a happy one, we should try it, although I still haven't played through her route. Well, let's see what this does : The road starts today From love, hope soared withi...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon May 28, 2012 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 15920

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Well here's an interesting exercice.

Hanako :

For so long I tried
To remember the taste of
Sweet life without pain.

Though I'll admit, yours was excellent.