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- Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome
- Replies: 70
- Views: 38878
Re: Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcom
I love this, keep it up!
- Tue Apr 03, 2012 2:55 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Demo version of Song about Emi (now improved)
- Replies: 32
- Views: 11684
Re: Recorded demo of song about Emi; give a listen?
Thanks, that means a lot! (My role was writing all the lyrics; helped write a bit of the music.) Could you please elaborate on what you mean by "grating?" If I understand correctly what you mean about flowing well, that could be due to the fact that we recorded everything in separate take...
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:53 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Missing stereotypes
- Replies: 33
- Views: 10786
Re: Missing stereotypes
Does it even matter? We can't really guess the intents of the authors very well, and I'd say they don't even matter that much. I think the results of the creative labour are what matters the most to me. And in this case, they are excellent.
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:50 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
- Views: 1572140
Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Well, in the one hand, things like Deja Vu are well known, I think almost everyone has these, and I read that they're due to the fact that our brain makes mistakes too at times. Then again, I also experienced some things that may or may not be inexplicable. I tend not to worry too much about them, s...
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:34 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Missing stereotypes
- Replies: 33
- Views: 10786
Re: Missing stereotypes
Well, like TV Tropes says: many of the tropes in KS are not played straight but desconstructed, reconstructed, averted, played with, etc. Deconstruction usually takes the form of "How would this trope play out with real life consequences applied to it". KS does that masterfully.
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7154
Re: Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
And immediately followed up with part 3. Almost a conclusion, Hawtness to follow, and sorry if this is a let down to anyone. Scarred Angel 3 I look outside the window. I see the sights of spring. Some late blooming cherry blossom trees spread their pink branches to the sky. I see the dazzeling sunli...
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:41 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
- Views: 1572140
Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
WorldlyWiseman, thank you for your story. Sometimes, fiction has more effect on us that reality does. That's fine, fiction is a way to learn, to have new experiences that you could not have in reality. Only some of us know that their time is more limited. I like to pretend that I still have a lot of...
- Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7154
Re: Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
Well here's part two. It's again a long rambing full of errors, so please poin tthem out. I like the "character who cogitates" style a lot since I myself am prone to cogitate a lot and converes only a bit. So here we go at it again: Scarred Angel -- Part 2 I can hear the sounds of spring a...
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 5:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7154
Scarred Angel (Hanako&Lilly erotic triangle)
Well , here's the first part of my standalone fanfic. The idea started in another Hanako&Lilly triangle thread, but I've started from scratch for my story. It's a Hanako and Lilly erotic triangle story that takes place after Hanako's good ending. Although it starts out with a massive internal re...
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:36 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Is it just me, or is Hanako better off... [Hanako Spoilers]
- Replies: 140
- Views: 46909
Re: Is it just me, or is Hanako better off... [Hanako Spoile
Guest Poster, I feel that it's not only about "how far" you push a person. For some people it's also about "how long" you push them. Sometimes, you don't need to push certain people very much at all, as long as you consistently do it, they will slowly get angrier and angrier, unt...
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Demo version of Song about Emi (now improved)
- Replies: 32
- Views: 11684
Re: Recorded demo of song about Emi; give a listen?
Well, I loved the Lyrics and the vocalist souds nice. But somehow the melodies don't seem to "flow" completely. I felt something grating, escpecially at the start of the song, particularly with the guitars? Sorry if that sounds harsh.... All in all this song is not bad as it it, and I appr...
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Broken Hearts Battle Fighting Game
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4569
Re: Broken Hearts Battle Fighting Game
Carlos21 thanks for your interest. At the moment I don't have enough people who can model well enough in Blender to help me make this game. Looks like this idea will have to wait until I can find enough people who are interested and willing to help out.
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 6:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
- Replies: 156
- Views: 82591
Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Well first of all, I apologize for jumping so brashly in with my own story. I'm glad FluffAndCrunch was not upset at my action. Ill respect your wishes, and start my own thread. That said,I'll probably change my story too since after thinking about it more, I found a critical flaw: I forgot Lilly is...
- Fri Mar 30, 2012 6:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
- Replies: 156
- Views: 82591
Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Heh, I was so fascinated by this idea that I wrote my own folllow up fic to yours. This is part one of it, part two, the HAWT stuff is for later! I'd like to apologise f it's offensive, wrong, not good english, etc. ----- Today, I am moving to a new house. I sit in the moving truck, next to the driv...
- Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
- Replies: 156
- Views: 82591
Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Hmm I like this story but I must concur that the ending was a bit too quick, escpecially how they immediately jump into sex. They would talk more both about the surrogacy and their love, and the sex would happen more spontaneously at a later date. Also, you should do a bit of research into Japanese ...