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Well done. As Nekken mentioned, there are some rough spots, but it's high quality. I was glad to see you used 'bated' instead of making the common mistake of using 'baited'. Am I weird for thinking the biggest mistake you made was having Jess tip at the Shanghai? I can't imagine how flustered that ...

I liked it. I thought it was interesting how you took many of the elements of the original game and shuffled them around: Jessica has elements of Lilly and Miki, for instance, while our viewpoint character feels a lot like a male Hanako. It's also there in the art club, the crazy ex, the supporting...

I wrote this and it's been in the fanfiction pastebin a while, but I figured maybe some of you here would like to read it.
http://pastebin.com/bbLeSm75
Basic idea is a new character comes to Yamaku about 4 years after Hisao did, and has his own adventure.

This was my request. I like the way it came out, too. Not what I was expecting. Characters were quite in character though, Emi especially.